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I  am a writer, a poet. My poetry is deep, dark and sad, I write a lot about death, but I can write happy if I want to and do. I love art, classical music, reading, nature, meditation, dreaming.  I collect old books, vintage clothing and jewelry,  I seem to like anything old,  I adore the Victorian house where I live with my cats and I often feel out of place in this world. 

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Form M- Monorhyme Judged


Blog Posted:4/19/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thanks to everyone who entered my contest, I appreciate the support. Two things . . . Some did not place because they got the title wrong, it was the theme word plus two words, not the theme word twice and not the theme word changed as in mother, mother's or moment, moments. I wanted it exactly as I wrote. So those poems did not place. The other thing, was the rhyming. I checked the rhyming on Rhymezone.com and if the rhyme was not listed there your poem did not place. Just because a word sounds the same, it does not mean it rhymes, I learned that the hard way, now I always make sure. So those poems did not place either. Otherwise, your poem placed somewhere in the contest, I liked all the poems just some more than others. Congratulations. I will be visiting your poems when I get time. My new contest is posted, Form N- Ninette or Nonet, with the usual 3 themes to use, and the Title requirement. Of the two forms it was Nonet that I liked the most, but either can be beautifully penned. I have examples on my poetry page of both forms. Constance
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  1. Date: 4/21/2017 3:25:00 PM
    sweet thanks, constance.. will be upa and about after my jet lag is gone... arrived from turkey few days ago.. hugggs and congrats to all

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  1. Date: 4/21/2017 1:23:00 AM
    Constance, I always look forward to your contests. The way you mix theme and form is very fun to me. Not half the contests are as fun for me to try as yours and others here that give us forms to do! Thanks for your contests and I am glad you liked my poem in the M form Contest.

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    Wings Avatar Broken Wings Date: 4/21/2017 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea thank you for the compliment. It does take time to check rhyming and syllable count but in the process I win too, by learning. Thanks for the support.
  1. Date: 4/20/2017 11:06:00 PM
    It was my pleasure to always try to tale part in your contest. I know how well you judge and even if I'm not placed, I still look forward to participate. Congrats to all the winners.

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    Wings Avatar Broken Wings Date: 4/20/2017 11:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Victor congratulations on your third place win. I had to go back and check. I was sure I had placed you.
  1. Date: 4/19/2017 4:59:00 PM
    Thank you for placing my poem on the winners' list, Constance. Thank you also for the inspiration which you provide. Congrats to all the winners. // paul

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    Wings Avatar Broken Wings Date: 4/20/2017 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Paul thanks for always supporting my contests with your beautiful poetry.
  1. Date: 4/19/2017 3:52:00 PM
    Thanks for another fabulous I do enjoy the challenges of these different forms:-) many thanks for my placement in your contest:-) hugs Jan xx

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    Wings Avatar Broken Wings Date: 4/20/2017 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jan thanks for that and the bonus is that I am learning all these forms too!

My Past Blog Posts

 
Form M- Monorhyme Judged
Date Posted: 4/19/2017 3:18:00 PM
Contest H Finalized
Date Posted: 2/17/2017 10:55:00 PM
Form G - or give me an NA finalized
Date Posted: 2/7/2017 10:24:00 PM
Contest F- Finalized
Date Posted: 2/2/2017 7:45:00 PM
Form E - Finalized
Date Posted: 1/24/2017 4:27:00 PM
Form D - Finalized
Date Posted: 1/20/2017 7:49:00 PM
Take The Dagger From My Heart, Please -3 Update
Date Posted: 11/18/2016 3:43:00 PM
Old Jewelry, Old Things, and Old, Old, Poems Finalized
Date Posted: 11/6/2016 9:38:00 AM
What's with the green highlighted words and those darn pop up ads
Date Posted: 11/4/2016 1:10:00 AM
Audio on poems
Date Posted: 10/29/2016 7:42:00 PM
Words Drowned In Tears Poetry Finalized
Date Posted: 10/23/2016 3:16:00 PM
Take The Dagger From My Heart, Please - 2 - Finished
Date Posted: 10/14/2016 5:15:00 PM
Is it just me?
Date Posted: 10/8/2016 1:25:00 PM
Overgrown with vines finalized
Date Posted: 10/8/2016 1:08:00 PM
All The Little Pieces
Date Posted: 9/22/2016 2:30:00 PM
Take The Dagger From My Heart, Please Finalized, sort of
Date Posted: 9/13/2016 2:18:00 PM
Write One - One Only Finalized
Date Posted: 9/8/2016 5:46:00 PM
Five Rhyming Stanza's Finished
Date Posted: 8/29/2016 8:48:00 AM
It Takes Four is Finalized
Date Posted: 8/21/2016 2:55:00 PM
Camouflage Me A Poem Finalized
Date Posted: 8/10/2016 7:40:00 PM
Camouflage Me A Poem Information
Date Posted: 8/5/2016 9:12:00 AM
I Got Zero, Nothing, Nada- 2 Finalized
Date Posted: 8/3/2016 8:49:00 PM
3 stanzas- 3 only is finalized
Date Posted: 8/2/2016 9:32:00 AM
Two Stanza- Two Only Finalized
Date Posted: 7/25/2016 3:04:00 PM
One Stanza - One Only Finalized
Date Posted: 7/19/2016 4:19:00 PM

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4/28/2017 ''Dreamcatcher'' Monorhymedream,night,
4/28/2017 My Sadness Pantoumdark,
4/27/2017 In Memory of Grumpy Cat Elegychildhood,
4/26/2017 Tirah, Mythology Fantasy Rhymefantasy,
4/26/2017 Limerick Contest Limerickfunny,
4/24/2017 Sweet Heart Lanternelost love,sad,
4/23/2017 Journal Entry, April 23, 2017 Versegrief,
4/22/2017 If I Close My Eyes Sonnetfuture,life,
4/21/2017 A Fearless Spirit Rhymehero,
4/19/2017 Struggling, Never Surrendering Free versecourage,death,fate,hope,l
4/19/2017 I Was Broken Versegrandmother,heartbroken,
4/19/2017 ''Mother'' Versemother,
4/16/2017 Back In Time Free versechildhood,memory,
4/16/2017 Age, Stepping Stones To Now Verseage,
4/16/2017 A Silent Symphony Versestars,
4/14/2017 Father Nonetfather,
4/14/2017 Mother Ninettemother,
4/14/2017 Haiku - blue door Haikuinspiration,nature,spring
4/14/2017 And then- Versedeep,grief,loss,
4/13/2017 Labyrinth Versegrief,lost love,
4/11/2017 Senyru- it is done Senryueaster,religious,
4/11/2017 Where Did I Put My ZEN Didacticforgiveness,introspection
4/9/2017 ''Dusty'' Tankabooks,dream,lost,
4/7/2017 A Gang Of Sparrows Versebird,
4/5/2017 ''Buried Alive'' Creepy Legend Narrativehistory,horror,
4/3/2017 ''Your Favorite Song Contest'' - Under A Thousand Stars Versesong,
4/2/2017 You, Die Every Day Free versegrief,
4/1/2017 Unshackle My Verse Verseevil,imagination,writing,
3/31/2017 Tranquility Versepeace,spiritual,
3/30/2017 Ode To Garden Flowers Odeflower,garden,
3/29/2017 Love Is A Bond Rhymefriendship,love,
3/28/2017 ''Until'' Narrativedeath,fantasy,love,
3/27/2017 Stuck In March Rhymemarch,spring,
3/27/2017 ad infinitum, forever, for ever and ever Free verseabuse,bullying,childhood,
3/25/2017 A ''Wizened'' Poet Versepoetry,writing,
3/24/2017 Doors, Doors, and Doors Prose Poetrydream,
3/22/2017 Feelings Free versefeelings,
3/21/2017 Memories, In The Silent Dust Prose Poetrychildhood,nostalgia,old,
3/20/2017 ''In The Corner'' Rhymeimagination,
3/19/2017 Love's Rejection Rhymelove hurts,
3/19/2017 Fabulous Fun Footles Footlefunny,
3/18/2017 Molly Coddle and her Collywobbles Narrativefor children,
3/18/2017 Spring Is Coming Soon Acrosticbeauty,spring,
3/16/2017 Different, From Yesterday Free versegrief,hope,life,
3/16/2017 Sun-Kissed Days Rhymespring,
3/15/2017 Forever Within My Heart Free versechildhood,love hurts,
3/14/2017 I Came A Long Way Free versedeath,grief,love,sorrow,
3/14/2017 Searching For Clover Limericksilly,
3/13/2017 Dappled Things Rhymenature,
3/13/2017 ''TweetTWEET'' Free versesilly,
3/13/2017 I Love You Verselove,
3/11/2017 Still Falls The Snow Versesnow,
3/10/2017 ''Surrender It'' Carpe Diemcourage,meaningful,spirit
3/9/2017 Kangaroo Versenature,
3/7/2017 Treasures Within Versedestiny,fate,life,peace,
3/7/2017 Worldarium, 2017 Prose Poetryfantasy,imagination,war,
3/5/2017 Television Noise Versenonsense,repetition,spoke
3/5/2017 Another Morning Narrativechildhood,
3/4/2017 I Travel By Bubble Narrativedream,
3/4/2017 ''Rainbow Colored Camouflage'' Narrativepeace,places,
3/3/2017 Jewelry Versegrandmother,
3/3/2017 I Wrote My Name Rhymegrave,snow,
3/2/2017 ''A Memory'' Rhymemeaningful,memory,
3/2/2017 ''Love's Altercation'' Free verselove hurts,
2/27/2017 Upside Down World Of Poverty Dramatic monologuepoverty,
2/27/2017 jungle Juejunature,rainforest,
2/26/2017 by the river Versebird,nature,river,tree,
2/25/2017 Only Two Weeks, The Promise Versefunny,
2/25/2017 The MUSE Will Not Be Subdued Versemuse,writing,
2/24/2017 Inclement Versewinter,
2/24/2017 Everyday is a Cliffhanger Acrosticanxiety,
2/23/2017 What The Eye Sees The Heart Cannot Forget Versebaby,
2/23/2017 I, RULE Canzoneworld,
2/22/2017 Fables, Legends, and Myths Versenative american,spiritual
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2/20/2017 Paris, My Destination Sonnetvacation,
2/20/2017 Forever Rhymefriend,inspiration,
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2/20/2017 Harmony Verseinspirational,
2/17/2017 The Butterfly In Me Versebutterfly,dance,happiness
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2/16/2017 Invisible Girl Acrosticintrospection,
2/16/2017 Using Invisible Ink Verseintrospection,writing,
2/15/2017 Sports- In The Man Cave Free versenostalgia,sports,
2/14/2017 My Beautiful Dream Terzanelledream,
2/13/2017 Oh, My Withered Dreams Free versedark,
2/12/2017 Listen To Your Inner Voice Verselife,
2/11/2017 Rose and Twinkle Toes Narrativefantasy,for children,
2/10/2017 Everything In Life Is Circular Narrativenative american,
2/10/2017 Beneath The Lies Free verselife,
2/9/2017 Sadness Pantoumlife,sad,
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2/7/2017 My Aching Heart Versedeath,grief,lost love,
2/6/2017 A Dreamworld Chimera Narrativeangel,dream,fantasy,garde
2/4/2017 ''a poem on a page'' Versedeath,grief,love,strength
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SHATTERED LIFE Cinquaindeath,for her,heartbreak,
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The Starlight Glade - For Constance Rhymedream,love,
By Love's Starlight Stream - Rhyme - Constance Rhymedream,feelings,love,
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Love's Heart Beating -For Constance ABCdream,love,
In Rainbow Dreams - For Constance ABCdream,love,
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