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Deborah Guzzi writes full time. Her third book, The Hurricane is available through Prolific Press. https://prolificpress.com/bookstore/prolific-books-c-12/the-hurricane-by-deborah-guzzi-p-151.html Her poetry appears in Allegro, Artificium, Shooter, & The Foxglove Journal in the UK, Subterranean Blue, Existere, The Ekphrastic Review, Scarlet Leaf Review & Subterranean Blue Poetry, Canada - Tincture, Australia - mgv2>publishing, France Cha: Asian Review, China - Vine Leaves Literary Journal, Australia - The Scarlet Leaf Review - Greece, Ribbons, pioneertown, Sounding Review, Bacopa Literary Review, The Aurorean, Liquid Imagination, The Tishman Review, Page & Spine & others in the USA. 

The Lovely Sijo

Blog Posted by Debbie Guzzi: 8/19/2013 6:05:00 PM

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Date: 8/26/2013 4:35:00 AM
Hi Deb, I am writing to you after a long time. I just came back on 24th and the first blog I read was yours. I have already composed Sedoka and am composing Sijo. I travelled to Korea long back and has written a poem "Scenes of Korea" I hope you are enjoying visit there.
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Date: 8/20/2013 5:21:00 PM
There is a sense of delicacy with the sijo that one almost wants to whisper it, and that is what appeals to me the most the most! These examples are breathtaking.....and do tell a story in the most simple of ways.... and then the turn around, the re-telling ...it is an art to write, not as easy as it looks.
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:03:00 PM
Hi Carrie! After I logged off, was still thinking of sijo, I wanted to add in how 'delicate' Sijo sounded- a certain mellowness to it and yes almost compelling one to speak it softly. But I got lazy, pressing on itty itty keys to go back then. So imagine my delight to see what you said here, I totally agree with you! :)
Date: 8/20/2013 5:00:00 PM
I know I'm not up on the philosophy behind this poem, but am struggling to get into it. Deb, how about you and Andrea, take a look at one I just put on the soup. Is sijo 1 roasting. I so appreciate this blog Debs, have been wanting to delve into this genre before now but love to procrastinate. No, have just been too wrapped up in haiku to explore others. But, I do have three sijo in my files now. I think.
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Date: 8/20/2013 3:15:00 PM
GREAT Andie! Another thing to think of is since most publishers DON'T want rhyme, this isn't rhyme and can be used just as easily to tell a story!
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:30:00 PM
I've always liked sijo, Debs, but I did a dodoitsu which fit my theme better. Just haven't posted it yet!
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Date: 8/20/2013 12:31:00 PM
Wonderful blog you have here, Debbie! I remember being intrigued with this form, and of how I asked Chris about Sijo before, and my thanks to him, I got a better insight to it. Been a while since I went on Sijo mode, so to speak (ok, my attempt to be on that mode), and seeing your blog reminded me how challenging yet fun it was. Yup, I think it can be quite a challenge to try to write one's Sijo in English to make it sound more lyrical (how I wish I knew how to speak Korean), there's just really so much more to this form than following certain syllable counts. What I like about this form is of how it also employs a twist, I can be a sucker for that. And yes, it sure is interesting how it can also make use of spacing...definitely so much more to delve into this form than what meets the eye.
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 8/20/2013 8:05:00 PM
Hopefully!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/20/2013 2:17:00 PM
thank YOU little monkey!! I hope to get one from you soon!
Date: 8/20/2013 7:13:00 AM
Hey Andie glad the form is growing on you!!! I bet you'll birth a beauty!
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Date: 8/20/2013 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Su, yes meant to be sung or accompanied by music yet you and I know all good poetry can be sung! Hell, look at the bad poetry that is sung [like rap...Debbie dives under the table]
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2013 7:51:00 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA! Shall I post, I am the Queen of RAP to annoy you, DEBBIE! HA HA! My daughter was SOOOO embarrassed when I performed it for her friends! Don't you go and goad me into doing it!
Date: 8/20/2013 7:07:00 AM
Dear Eileen JUST write do not judge yourself before you have even let yourself go FLY on the wings of the joy you feel!! [time enough to be a judgemental mother after you have given birth LOL BUT please not before!!!]
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2013 7:42:00 AM
OK....HERE GOES...NOTHING! ;)
Date: 8/20/2013 7:05:00 AM
How fantastic Chris!!! I'm coping to save for myself your explanation and I am beyond thrilled when you seriously teach! Perhaps you know if or which tropes are used in sijo? metaphor, simile? assonance? maybe all the common ones? And the content is SUBJECTIVE even if the root is Japanese..yes?
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Date: 8/20/2013 6:56:00 AM
Debbie...I TRIED to write one....Shall I give you a look see before I post it to save me infinite embarrassment? ;) Waiting to hear from ya! Hugs!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
:)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/20/2013 7:12:00 AM
your excitement is a joy, never be embarrassed by trying to learn to me it's embarrassing to be ignorant and NOT try!
Date: 8/20/2013 6:48:00 AM
These remind me of tanka poetry that has been expanded to allow more details, and they read like short free verse. I liked them, Debs. They are examples of reflective and descriptive poetry.
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:02:00 AM
DEBBIE DEBBIE DEBBIE DEBBIE....I'm FLYING!!! WHAT BEAUTY!!!! Oh OH OH!!! I can't wait to show these to my Korean friends. I loved the mountain one, and the one about the tears being pearls, and the dream one, and the one about holding back the sun and and and.....Debbie...Thank you for broadening my mind. Thank you!!!! I would love to try one of these but I'm don't feel up to the task. I read what Chris wrote, and it does sound complicated....Oh dear... I'm going to read up on it here on the forms section....Thanks, my dear!!! HUGS!!! I want to save some of these. DON'T take down the blog, OK? I want to print it out, but I'm not at the university right now...XOXOXOX :) :) :) :)
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