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Hall of Shame Award....another candidate ! - Carrie Richards's Blog

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I have been a part of Poetry Soup since 2009, and have made wonderful friendships, and been inspired beyond what I had could have ever imagined .  As a novice poet when I first joined up, I have learned so much, thanks to all of you.  Thank you for the many gifts of poetry, challenges, and inspirations.  But especially for the friendship and encouragement offered here. Thank you all, very much !


Hall of Shame Award....another candidate !


Blog Posted:4/24/2013 4:28:00 PM
While Idaho potatoes grow green shoots
in the dark basement dampness...

While unworn sequined dresses
in a dark corner of the closet
long to be worn,...... long for the light

While books, unread
on upper shelves, bound,
have spines never bent

While seeds never sown, flowers never grown

Stories never shared, hands never held

Love never told

A new day is dawning........
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Huh???  Call me Potato Head....how in heck did I ever get this gem in my brain ???
potatoes growing green shoots??? what???...................
SHOOT ME !!!!! pLEASE SOMEONE SHOOT ME!
oh and ps.........I don't even have a basement!!
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Date: 4/29/2013 9:33:00 PM
I think we all have things buried deep inside us, silenced by choices we've made. You know, like Frosts' "Road Not Taken". And, at times, they beckon us and whisper softly, "What if.........? "Why not.......? " I'm still here......RAY
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Date: 4/26/2013 5:37:00 PM
I think each stanza separately would make ok poems. Sounds like my ADD brain at times, all over the place. Lol. Like the potatoes the best though.
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Date: 4/25/2013 11:48:00 AM
Hmmm...I'm not touchin' this one........smells moldy. ;)
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:32:00 PM
You might not have a basement, but I think in your case you should be banished to an attic ....lol.... I was beginning to get optimistic at the internal rhyme of "sown," and "gown", but then you blew it to redeem yourself with the next line... "Stories never told, hands to hold...." could perhaps have worked? Oh! I give up....No, I will not shoot you. Off to the Tower you go.... Love, Su
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:35:00 PM
I am impressed ...not at the poem.... but on how you aced the worst poems,,,, xox...Linda
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:27:00 PM
Interesting.... Who dare watch.... Just passing by.
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Date: 4/24/2013 5:39:00 PM
Idaho potatoes. ROFL! Oh, Carrie, has me beaming, root cellar, indeed! But as a book lover, did enjoy the whole "spines never bent" slant... hmmm... thinking... hmmm.... oh...YEAH! WAIT! NEXT BLOG COMING! HOLD ON TO YOUR HATS!
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Date: 4/24/2013 5:19:00 PM
While some poems remain better un- wrote.....lol Carrie......your introspection knows no bounds.......
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My Past Blog Posts

 
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Hall of Shame Award....another candidate !
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Romance Is Alive and Well !!
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In My Absence
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Apologies For Neglecting My Souper Friends!
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