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Read Poems by Mike Chomik

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Underneath It All

Dark clouds crowd the sky, diminishing light
Eternally, the Flower, Death covers it
Not a Soul is left to shiver, Death is night

Death controls the life of Man, all Lovers
Known as the Dark Angel he comes and goes
All fear him, for that he gives no do-overs

He steals life as the wind quietly blows
There is no remedy, not even time
Only God knows that the soul truly owes

The Soul lasts until the last, final chime
No hope, No desire, time to feed the Fire
You go to Hell, with Satan you will dine

You can’t be saved with your Lover’s desire
Your Heart, Body, and Soul are now Fire

Copyright © Mike Chomik | Year Posted 2013


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  1. Date: 4/20/2016 3:00:00 AM

    Mike Chomik, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Mike, a very deep and hurtful feeling to be lost like this...pd

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