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Kai Michael Neumann's Peace Of Mind Contest...28 Jul 25

Lightness Of Peace

Bright is the dew that embraces my earth
As seasons breathe with a lingering sigh; 
Oaks in teal ripple and glimmer in peace
With hymns of ' thank you' I can't defy.
 
In this free motion, tranquility abides
North winds drift along, gentle and refined
Encircling on the core of quietude;
That  hours glide perfectly, weaving a bind.
 
For gratitude becomes my life’s keeper 
Each passing turns into a rune, a fire;
Till lightness of ease imbues vibrant thoughts
Benevolent as sunrays that inspire.
 
Today leans again with a lustrous face
In calm persuasion, my heart and soul meet,
This wholeness bathing in its  grateful flow
When life resounds without any conceit.
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Agustin Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this, aking Kabayan... so inspiring. God bless you.
Godwin Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:51 AM
I'm glad I failed to be the 35th because it led me to your poems and I always enjoy reading your work. This is no exception, I love each line and think it should do well in the contest, it did in my heart. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Hind Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:24 PM
Should be a winner, Nette. You are a really gracious poet. :)
Fleming Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 2:14 AM
Still writing rich and luxuriant poetry I see, Nette. Your poetry is always full of intense vibe and sparkling colour. Nicely penned! :) john
Woods Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:13 PM
Righteous rhyme! Xo
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:25 PM
uplifting words, Nette! I especially liked the 3d verse. I liked your imagery and flowing rhyme scheme as well. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
Gasun Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Gorgeous poem my dear poet friend & sis, Nette. Peace starts within us. A great winning piece sis. Thanks a lot for sharing! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs
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