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Forever and Ever and Ever

I'm going crazy
At 17 I am in love with this girl 
But some thoughts in my head making my mind in a whirl 
Making me wanna sit in a curl 

I don't know what to do when words like
Forever and ever and ever and ever
Are words being said
By you
And playing over and over in my head
I'm going crazy
Tryin not to let these words faze me

But when you say you'd die if we broke up 
I don't know if I should lie 
Or make up 
Or break up 

I just wanna run 
Thoughts making me wanna lift a gun 
I'm going crazy
These thoughts might just faze me 

I bought you two rings that you asked for 
Straight diamonds out the door 
When these words came out your mouth I almost fell to the floor 

Beause words like promise rings and wedding rings 
And my crazy feelings 
Are making me crazy 

I don't know whether to run
Or hide with these feelings
These thoughts 
These over emotional bleedings
Are killing me

Because girl your making me crazy 

Because I miss being single it's
Less emotional 
And I don't know 
If I could hang with other girls anymore
Or 
Do anything anymore 
Cause
Forever is how long you'll be here for 

So which is it
Walk out the door 
Or
Keep doing what I've been doing every day before

Because I can't keep going crazy
It's just for the sake of me
And honestly I'm sorry 
It's making me worry 
And the words your saying are realy amazing me 
But my mind is in a flurry making me worry and my mind is crazy I'm in a hurry 
I
Don't know what i'd do without you but you got me questioning me 
And
Who I wanna be 
And secretly
I got these thoughts going through my head 
Making me go crazy 

I'm now letting myself be lazy 
And letting myself be mean 
But
Intentionally 
Because honestly
I'm not quite happy 
With me 
Not you
It's not you that's worrying me
But it's me that's worrying me

But I don't know what id do without you so maybe it's more of a questioning of who or how'll 
I'll Blame you 
Cause it's going to come true

It's just a matter of who will break up with who
I just hope it's not me
Breaking up with you

Copyright © Keenan Gibson | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/1/2016 11:53:00 PM

Keenan, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
Date: 2/1/2010 8:23:00 PM

Go on and kiss the girl. Welcome to poetry soup, hope you know you are among friends for you got a friend in me. I love the inner look, the raw exposure of the emotions as thoughts. wonderful
Date: 2/1/2010 10:19:00 AM

Welcome to soup. These emotions are just emotions of the teens. Hope that the love relationship works out for the best for all concerned. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Date: 2/1/2010 6:26:00 AM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
Date: 2/1/2010 3:45:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Keenan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

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