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Read Poems by carly jordaan

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I know you there

I know u there and i no what's going through your head
I know that u cant sleep tonight as your thoughts are running through your mind
I know what u want to do
I know you giving up but im not giving up on you

the more you fall the more you feel you cant get out
there is no window in u heart ache and pain
you suffering my dear friend and you want to die
you told me many things tonight that just made me cry
but still i know that u there

don't fade away
don't put off that light
don't shut you eyes and say good night
don't say goodbye
don't go
cause I now that you are there

my dear friend i no you strong
I know you will smile again
it will just take time
let out you'r pain
let out you'r words
speak my friend
you will be herd
as i know longer want to cry

please don't die don't choose that path
you better than that
please my friend
I'm begging you
I'm down on my knees
don't go
cause i know you there

i love you my friend

Copyright © carly jordaan | Year Posted 2009


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  1. Date: 1/20/2016 9:33:00 PM

    Carly, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
  1. Date: 6/3/2009 6:49:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup Carly. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 5/30/2009 3:29:00 AM

    Hi Alley thank u so much for the welcome i am glad u liked the poem
  1. Date: 5/29/2009 6:57:00 PM

    Lovely poem! Welcome to the soup! -Alley
  1. Date: 5/29/2009 11:38:00 AM

    thank u friends
  1. Date: 5/28/2009 8:00:00 AM

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 7:26:00 AM

    Welcome to the soup, may you be a friend here forever. God bless you.
  1. Date: 5/28/2009 5:15:00 AM

    Relationship is built on mutual willingness ... I like your exploring of love and desire counterbalancing the relationship moment ... very original too. Nice write, my friend.