Get Your Premium Membership

Read Poems by Jcb Brul

Jcb Brul Avatar Jcb Brul - LIFETIME Premium Member Jcb Brul - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below are poems written by poet Jcb Brul. Click the Next or Previous links below the poem to navigate between poems. Remember, Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth. Thank you.

List of ALL Jcb Brul poems

Best Jcb Brul Poems

+ Follow Poet

The poem(s) are below...



NextLast

Gemini Garden, Silent One

"We are all petals of imperfections sharing the same sun" - Silent One

Here in this Gemini garden~
we are all precious petals~
naive and gentle 
wild and free
midst freshly broken morn

We sing as  silvery silence
embraces June's warmest night;
We dance at the first kiss of sunlight 
on our pallid skin 
transforming hues 
from day to day.


Alas, we dwell~
on  idyllic 
but ephemeral setting,
We are endowed 
with vibrant  colours ~
only to fade away 
on moonless eve

We wilt and  dry~
We're bound to die
in few golden sigh

Our petals are canvas
of unfinished masterpieces 
waiting for an artist 
in this  Gemini garden
where Silent One
whispers eternity.


Copyright © Jcb Brul | Year Posted 2024

NextLast

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

 
Date: 7/3/2024 1:15:00 PM

A really beautiful poem, you Gemini garden sounds awesome.... Love that last stanza.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Date: 7/2/2024 9:43:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Yes, we are all petals of imperfections. Yet if we stay together, we become colorful flowers of priceless worth. The last line is a great compliment to Silent One, our great poet friend. Congratulations dear friend, Jez on your first place win.
Date: 7/2/2024 8:26:00 PM

WOW ! Big Congrats to win. Last stanza is most impressive. Blessings. Have Good Days.
Date: 7/2/2024 5:37:00 PM

The last stanza compliments SO brilliantly, love the lines including all poets. Congratulations on your top win Jcb!
Date: 7/2/2024 2:23:00 PM

Lovely poetry JcB, congratulations on your win in Ink’s contest… Beryl
Date: 7/2/2024 9:28:00 AM

Congrats, JCB! Very nice!
Date: 7/2/2024 9:05:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Great last 6 lines....  Have a great day writing away...............
Date: 7/2/2024 8:27:00 AM

So lovely! Congrats on your well deserved placement
Date: 7/2/2024 7:14:00 AM

“ where silent one whispers eternity” that line really won me over! Beautiful! And so evocative and your words flow just seamlessly in a very fitting manner for the quote youv used too! I love how youv started too, we are all indeed, precious in our own way, in our garden, although we sometimes dwell on idyllic yet ephemeral colors! So true! Pleasure reading your use of the quote and seeing you join in for the celebration! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Thank you
Date: 6/26/2024 8:10:00 AM

What a wonderful write for Silent One. Have a great day writing away...............

Back


Book: Shattered Sighs