raindrops hiku

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For Brian Strand's 1398 Poetry Contest 28 July 2025

, , , * , * , , , raindrops on the roof , , , , , sky's gentle evening tapping~ * , , * , , , * hushing me to sleep /____________\ / \ u u u u u u u uu u\ || || || ||

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/28/2025 6:36:00 AM

Raindrops on the roof can have that effect,

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/28/2025 3:35:00 AM

Beautifully done, JCB:-) Congratulations on your top win!

Valsa George

Date: 7/28/2025 3:04:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku. The gentle tapping of rain drops on the roof is like a sweet lullaby, putting one to sleep. Nice graphic representation too. Congratulations, dear Jez on your first place win.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2025 2:59:00 AM

Nice schematic presentation of your wonderful haiku. Congratulations on your trophy win