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Really

it is understood in modern English writing
that the word really
is not correct grammar

really important, really beautiful, really bad

a writer has two options:
substitute one word instead,
one that carries greater meaning—
a word that communicates just how much more important, beautiful, or bad something is,
because you must be unable to express what you want to say

or simply remove really
because they (whoever they are that decide these things)
have assumed the strong emotions, feelings, & thoughts you wrote, must be exaggerated

but sometimes when you write that something is really important,
you don’t mean crucial or imperative,
you just mean
really.
important.

or when I say I really like you,
I don’t mean I fancy you, I adore you, I appreciate you
& I definitely don’t mean I love you.
at least I don’t think so.

I mean I could love you, that I want to love you, but in no way do I know now.

but what I do know is
like just doesn’t cut it.

when we were kids, it was always such a big deal when someone went from like to like-like.
our language as children evolved
to communicate something for which adults would use a completely different word.
it’s so funny that saying a word twice increased the meaning.

but alas,
(because this is a poem & poems use words like alas)
the evolution of learning removes cause for the evolution that got us to like-like.

I am an adult now,
& I like-like you.
I am an adult now,
& I do not think I love you.
I am an adult now,
& I know that like doesn’t cut it.
so I am an adult now,
& I really like you.

Copyright © Kristen Drechsler | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 5/7/2018 9:07:00 PM

if this is true: "She helped lead me on a path I didn’t know I wanted to go on. She found in me, Something I never expected to find." Never let her go!
Date: 5/7/2018 9:03:00 PM

"In unification with nature and all of life." My favourite line of the night. And please, folks if nothing else, can we PLEASE get back to our natural instinct? PLEASE?
Date: 5/7/2018 9:00:00 PM

Diana, I fear that you understand this fear too well. I read this, and thought, 'It sounds like she has lived it, and understands the fear of it." Whether this be true or not, your empathy and ability to say what many want to say, but cannot, is to be applauded. Well written, and so believable!
Date: 5/7/2018 8:55:00 PM

What a beautiful way to portray a sad scenario. But the truth of the poem is at the end, it took a child's eye to lead them. It usually does.
Date: 5/7/2018 8:51:00 PM

Cute poem. I still like the word "really" but I really like the word "like-like." Thank you, Kristen.

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