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Secrets

As I lay down with my eyes closed
I can see the things that my mind shows
I can see the things the I hide from my self 
The things that not even my friends know

Copyright © Declan Bremner | Year Posted 2023



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The Stalker

You stalk and lurk and creep 

You're with me as i go to school

And with me as i brush my teeth 

You put thoughts in my head that I know aren't true 

You make me Lazy, quite and stressed 

I'm not sure what i did to upset you 

You come right next to my ear 

I hear you take a deep breath

Before you speak real clear 

You truly are one of an evil kind

You've got me screaming for help

But you've got control of my body, soul and mind

Copyright © Declan Bremner | Year Posted 2023

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Lost

it’s been one month 
since the time has past 
if i knew that time i held you
would’ve been my last 
i would’ve dug my claws in 
to never let you go 
my days are cold 
and my nights are alone
I wish you never left that night.
and I wish you would’ve stayed 
and that  we finished that fight 
and we could’ve behaved 
because now we’re  individuals 
own groups, own circles 
and yet i can’t go to sleep
because  i’m still up hurting 
it doesn’t mean it was a mistake 
or that it’s not worth it 
but i look back on memories 
and I view them as perfect 
and in reality that not what it was.
I wish that  i treated you better
i feel so much regret 
for not opening up 
and getting it off my chest.
you once said 
‘you just don’t get it, i don’t know how else to explain it to you’ 
I understood what you said 
and if i am being so true 
my honest word is 
i couldn’t express myself to you 
i tried as hard as i could 
yet 
my efforts 
we’re no good.

after our breakup 
i was worried for your health 
i wanted to reach out 
and to  try to help 
but i know you’re working on yourself.
it’s hard for me to move on 
it’s a process full of pain 
but i know it’s the right thing to do
not in my heart, but in my brain.
i hope you’re doing okay 
i mean, as well as you can 
i hope one day you can go off 
and find the right man 
who gives you what you deserve 
because even though you can’t right now 
i can see your self worth.
i hope he can be like me 
and make you the centre of his world 
and even though not mine 
to me, you’re still more 
way more 
than just a girl.

Copyright © Declan Bremner | Year Posted 2023

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8 Letters

love is just 4 letters 
to me the feeling was new 
but i knew what it was
the instant my eyes saw you
to me, you feel like home 
and i’m not just saying that 
you never make me feel alone 
you truly understand me
on a level i can’t explain 
and i really love the way
that you’re a little bit insane 
even though that may be true 
let me tell you some things
that I love about you,
when I’m having a bad day and you turn it good 
telling me ‘yes king as you should’
when someone says something dumb
and you roll your eyes to the back of your head 
or when you make fun of me and say
‘you heard what i said’
when you relate to a fluffy bunny 
when i know that you’re a menace 
when you say you bit my on accident 
but i know that you meant it 
or when you go underwater 
and your hair begins to twirl 
because you look so beautiful 

that’s when i realised 
  you’re more then a girl 
so I rearranged the stars 
and I put you at the centre of my world 
how did i manage to get a 5’3 demon 
how has a kind soul, and eyes as bright as pearls 
and everyday I look to your pretty face and  then I see your curls
i still can’t believe i’m dating 
the most amazing, gorgeous girl in the world

and when i’ve had a rough day
there’s only one thing i need to hear you say 
3 words 
8 letters 
and hearing it always makes my day better 
I
Love
You
they are not just words 
they mean so much more 
so when I tell you that I love you
just know i mean it from my core.

I Love You
Happy birthday

Copyright © Declan Bremner | Year Posted 2023

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Changes

They say actions speak louder then words
then why do your words leave my broken and hurt 
you say Im not who you want me to be 
I could try to change 
but then I wouldn't be me 
And I take pride for my self 
Wasn't just the words 
but the emotion I felt
I mulled all night about the things that you've said 
couldn't get to sleep they're drilled in my head
tossing and turning to my braincells were dead 
and I was preying 
for everything to end.

then I was thinking.

I don't believe in change
I think life's a journey 
and we all pave our way 
some never make it
and that is a damn shame.
so then
We put up walls to hide our insides 
to protect our vulnerability that 
we try to hide 
as you near the end and you look to demise 
will you be happy about your disguise?
Because if I can be me 
why cant you be you?
scream it from the rooftops 
shout it to the moon 
there is no gift greater 
then you
being you.

Copyright © Declan Bremner | Year Posted 2024




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