Secrets

As I lay down with my eyes closed I can see the things that my mind shows I can see the things the I hide from my self The things that not even my friends know

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Shane Thacker

Date: 6/5/2023 4:15:00 PM

This is a wonderful expression of fear, self-doubt, regrets, pain, hopes, and so much more. Great job, Declan.

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/10/2023 4:33:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Peter Rees

Date: 3/8/2023 6:11:00 AM

Interesting. Don’t close your eyes- is that the message ?