Secrets

As I lay down with my eyes closed
I can see the things that my mind shows
I can see the things the I hide from my self 
The things that not even my friends know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Thacker Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 4:15 PM
This is a wonderful expression of fear, self-doubt, regrets, pain, hopes, and so much more. Great job, Declan.
Agustin Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 4:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
Rees Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Interesting. Don’t close your eyes- is that the message ?
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