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Man's Will To Do Good

Apendix 5
subsection 4
3rd paragraph
2nd quadrant

read your contract

list of how its not working
so you can work things out

if this is man's will to do good
what are we here for but to work on this
what is the test
as good as it gets
focusing on
an attempt to fail
to stack the deck of our own fate
teach ourselves familiar succesfull patterns

reach out to learn the new things to broaden
expected challenges foreshadowed by everything being eventual
why does
everyday
have to be
my own worst nightmare
life in the gutter
no escape as easy as disturbing as the soul's misery

kept back for ages
the grudge
man's will to do good
read your contract
subsection 2 
fourth index
3rd paragraph

desribe this to me and live through me vicariously

Premium Member Mesmerized

Sit quiet; look deep into my eyes,
Find my center and drown yourself there.
Slowly let go..let your channels run free..
Look deep; let me have your power.

I am with you; I am holding your hands,
Let your dark pain flow to me..
This magnetism, locks our eyes firmly..
I invade you and let you live freely again.




This is based on the work of Anton Mesmer
A German physician who lived 1724-1815
His early work  led to the  development of 
Hypnotism by J Braid later in the 1840's

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