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Some Sounds Remind of Knuckles Cracking

Clatter claws cascade downward into listening drums. 
Pigeons are the worst. Rose bushes sit quietly all summer
then only after they have lost their heads
do they scratch and squark nightly.

Toilets that are not in your home haunt and taunt.
Dry joints crunch down - listening synovial cartilages
stick shift and slip out of gear. 
There is the jack-hammer juggling of junk mail
as it flaps its paper wings and falls untidily.

Sometimes dreams climb over the hedgerow,
clamber up a back wall, and then hollow bones play
upon the rooftop - deranged harpsichords
goad a hungry moon to howl for something dead.
Knuckles crack under a sheer cliff of silence.

Premium Member My Pack Rat Eye Tis

accumulation
choking the room bitterly
an embarrassment
carefully tromping through it
side-stepping junk gingerly

My pack rack eye-tis
surrounds me untidily
disturbing eyesore
jumping over largest pile
not inviting company

Premium Member Shoes

Shoes
Left      
                         Right
left untidily under the bed,
but no one comes in here


          Since
he
                        left
slippers, not shoes,
have taken stock of me


             I
shuffle
                      in
my slippers in the house,
hardly noticing clock, see .


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10/18/2015

Contest  - Screwed VIII

Sponsor - rob carmack

A Win


Premium Member Lifting Tram Rails In 1940

Lifting tram rails in 1940,
he was aware of the Louvre...
was aware of a cameraman.
Now we see a black and white world,
where leaves on trees have shed their green,
and the sky is a wish-washy grey...

We see the tram rails piled untidily,
and a bicycle boy on right
fearing he'll be late for school.
We see his and rail man's Paris of 1940
with years ahead of war in Europe,
and now bereft of trams.


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7/10/2015

Contest - Open Poetry

Sponsor - Charlotte Puddifoot

4th place win

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