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My Pack Rat Eye Tis

accumulation choking the room bitterly an embarrassment carefully tromping through it side-stepping junk gingerly My pack rack eye-tis surrounds me untidily disturbing eyesore jumping over largest pile not inviting company

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/14/2018 5:44:00 AM

I like the, "pack rack eye-tis" much better than the word, "clutter". One of my Uncles was considered a pack rat because of the stuff he drug home and recycled but, he would take things apart and reuse them; he built his own bicycle once when his family couldn't afford one. What some folds call pack rats, the pack rats themselves, may be artists, inventors, recyclers; some people repair things and give it to those who have need of it. In short, pack rats, are necessary.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2018 6:03:00 AM

My piles are nodding their heads in agreement, and throwing out their hands with happy that you have said this. All I have to do is turn to watch them waving at you.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/14/2018 12:03:00 AM

My pack rack eye-tis, My Pack Rat Eye-Tis!// lovely interesting

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/14/2018 6:03:00 AM

I am such a pack rat; it almost disables me sometimes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2018 7:43:00 PM

My husband thinks every little pile of my clutter is horrible. So I am always moving stuff around to stash it out of sight. I really need my Xmas break to reorganize the house again and make it more tidy. Wish you luck. Clutter can make one feel so overwhelmed.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2018 8:57:00 PM

Just a little bit of it puts me down and out; makes me want to nap I am afraid.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/13/2018 6:55:00 PM

This is the state of my basement, lol ... every little thing has a precious memory attached, so how can I let it go?? I must find a way, or it will swallow me! Wonderful write ...

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/13/2018 8:57:00 PM

Almost the only way I can get rid of any stuff is to watch one hour of the show Hoarders. It has helped to cure me. I highly recommend it if you can watch it without getting physically sick, my friend.