Unthinking Poems | Examples


Premium MemberYoung Rebel

You placed yourself in harm’s way. 
I hated that you would join the fray.

Now you bravely faced and fought 
the devil I had stupidly bought.

It was unwise, absurd from the start,
Foolish and silly to be in my heart.

You said, “No. Let’s not do this.”
I said, “Yes.” and gave you a kiss. 

You staunchly stood in front of the crowd
Leaving me behind, frightened and cowed.
 
The melee began and I was gobstruck.
How could I have bought such bad luck?

You moved with dexterity but in the end
You were injured but thankfully, left to mend.

A black and blue eye and raging road rash,
I regretted my call to be bold and brash.

I realized how immature I had been.
I should have listened to you my friend.

You took the beating rather than flee. 
Courageously defended my right to be me.
Categories: unthinking, bullying, conflict, courage, friend,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberNever Had a Name Before

Identical twins. Never having a name.
Referred to as the Tone Twins. Hey, Twins! Twinsie.
Assumed to be one person for the first eighteen years.
Until one could get away, leaving fast, chased by the other.

Twin A is independent, likes being alone, seeks solitude.
Her identical-looking sister draws a crowd, likes attention.
Twin A is a creator, forming poems, cartoons, and artistic works.
Her identical-looking sister believes these outliers are nonsense.

Twin A is a reader, especially likes non-fiction, 
biographies, and history.
Her identical-looking sister has not picked up a book for fifty-years.
Twin A has sought her own identity her entire life, distancing herself.
Twin B, still wants to dress alike, thank you very much, 
still seeking attention.

Twin A is steadily reminding herself she has escaped, 
she can stop running now.
Twin B is begging her to come to her church 
and wear identical outfits; but Twin A loathes church.
Twin A enjoys her flowers, her vegetables, and her life.
As does Twin B, who continues to hope they are exactly alike.
Categories: unthinking, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Lyric


Unthinking

Earth was sending a long 
shadow on the moon.
A great night for both of them.

        *

A city of dreams 
lies still. A divine path 
opens for the erring earthlings.

        *

A night falls 
surreptitiously on the lake.
The moonlight was trapped by waves.


Satish Verma
Categories: unthinking, art,
Form: ABC
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