Unrenewed Poems | Examples


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Your Will Oh Father

Our Father who art in Heaven, 
Hollowed be Thy name. 
Thy kingdom come, 
Thy will be done on earth as it is in Heaven. 
Thy will be done on earth as it is in Heaven (with an agitated voice)
Thy will be done on earth as it is in Heaven (with a calmer voice)
Thy will be done on earth as it is in Heaven.....mmmh! 

Is this the will You were referring to? 
Is this the will that we should succumb to?
Is this the will that we are now accustomed for?  
Is this it? Is this the Will? 

Well......well I don’t like it! 
Neither do my brothers and sisters who think You have turned Your back against them! Or have You? 

I don’t mean to sound rude, but in sound mind and body I write this letter to You, anyone would see that we’re screwed! 
Jesus, I don’t mean to intrude, but....
Our strength is unrenewed, 
Our souls yearn soulful food! 

Our souls yearn for a new fire! 
Our souls yearn for you Oh Messiah! 
The world sees us as liars, deceivers! 
“Where is The God you preach about at church on a Sunday morning?
Is He not going to come down and rescue you?” 

Your will hurts Father
Your Will is just too much!

Hanging On

Diverting his eyes from that last final hour,
denying death its due

His conscience and awareness tight in his grip,
ownership unrenewed

Both arms around life, he’s forever rejected,
blinded as time starts to bleed

Meeting the end in a loss of control
—damned by what he won’t concede

(Villanova Pennsylvania: October, 2020)

The Borderline

I dare you
not to read the words,
I double-dare you true

To live outside
a sentenced life
—your spirit unrenewed

(Dreamsleep: February, 2020)


Premium Member The Trade-In

my old sports car’s
fun, eye-catching plates

tossed in the trunk of
my new sedan

part of my joy
unrenewed. . . . like
those vanity plates


For  Joann Grisetti's
 Shanzi Poetry Contest

Premium Member Unheeded In the Spread of His Name, Quaking

Unheeded in the spread of his name, quaking
   Through the knit brow cuddling the sombre eye
Twice buckled into the couch of his yearning

The mouldy cast of unsculptured hands, moulting
   In the surging sweaty cries' unexpected sigh
Sooner lost than won with unrenewed longing

Every day, every night in chastened haste, calling
   That one face, one hand trembling on bosomy thigh
Through all the twigs of his knotty brooding

Mighty log in the dismembered chips, raking
   In uneasy orgasms of a protracted lie
The woman clasped in the memory revolting

Fleshy hair to press, hovering nostrils, drinking
   In the incensing vapours, and that face a wry
Screaming in the rubbing spasm, a bloody cursing

All, all and more, and the biting shame, clawing
   Now at the name, silently growing, that shy
Child of old hopefully shared and lingered moaning


© T. Wignesan, 1960, first pub. in "Forum Academicum", University of Heidelberg, 1957 (from the collection: Tracks of a Tramp. Kuala Lumpur-Singapore: 1961)

In the Name of God

IN THE NAME OF GOD

So much is said and done
In the name of God
For good, for evil
To give credit or blame

Who are we to use 
The name of the Holy One
God Most High
To explain our own actions
Which may be righteous
Or on the contrary
Only a deception 
Of what is truly
The will of God

Care must be taken
To avoid misrepresenting
The Creator
Judgment for idle words
Abusing one another
And God’s name
His character defamed

Lies believed brings destruction upon many
Ignorance rules in the heart of
The unredeemed, the unrenewed
Even the knowledgeable
Often lack sound judgment
But in the end
God will not be mocked 
And His truth 
Will be evident to all

mja


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