The Trade-In

my old sports car’s
fun, eye-catching plates

tossed in the trunk of
my new sedan

part of my joy
unrenewed. . . . like
those vanity plates


For  Joann Grisetti's
 Shanzi Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 9:33 AM
another i have not seen, a winner i see, and deservenly so....
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 2:09 PM
((()))Congrats on your win..Sara
Williams Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, nice take on the theme..David
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 9:55 AM
A great write, Andrea. Any new car is a thrill to me. Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 2:20 PM
the trading pays off, andie... cheers to you for this fine win!...:) huggs
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Hey,Congrats on the WIN!!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 5:37 AM
congrats Andrea on another amazing win for this incredible and fun poem luv.. feeling the flow .. my car is my baby cakes..haha..
Babcock Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 11:53 AM
I get attached to my cars and then when we trade them in I get attached to the next one. Maybe because I drive so much that I form an attachment or maybe plain silly. love phyl
Pettit Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 5:13 PM
Did you really want to buy another sports car? It seems like you reluctantly bought this new sedan. Nevertheless, this is a good write.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 7:59 PM
Hey girl-this is great. Is this the one you had the Andie55 plates on (I hope I remembered right)? Have a great rest of weekend btw :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 5:14 PM
yes, you remembered!! It was andie55
Wesley Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 8:15 PM
You need to say what's on those plates Andrea, might keepme up all night:)mmI can see how attached you are to your wheels!
Larison Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 6:02 AM
That is wonderful ! I love reading your poetry. xo laurel
Maverick Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 3:31 PM
good to read this short sweet write you got going here Andrea.
Austin Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Sports car, eh. This suggests fun memories, much more fun than a new - ugh - sedan. Behave yourself, now. Love, Dave
Susan Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 8:36 AM
wow - I just read your comments and I am amazed at how different they are from my interpretation. I thought this was a metaphor on people and divorce, and sad.
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 8:58 AM
susan, the cars represent "stages of life" and I was very sad to lose my carefree, happier, more healthy feeling days of my 40's when I went to the kia (hubbie didn't want another convertible) but I swear , when the Kia gives out, I will be looking for sports car again!!
Macmillan Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:27 PM
Oh, man, the more tired I get, the more I dither! This is a cool shanzi! Like the use of the word unrenewed the most. Best wishes in the contest!
Macmillan Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:25 PM
Ready for this? Ahem, I don't drive! Yuppers. 46 and no license. I will drive by the time I'm 50. I took lessons just as I got pregnant ...at 42. Standard car! AWK! But I get the two lives in this poem. Sometimes it feels like we live 5 lives, really, doesn't it? I don't see years as chapters, sometimes, but more like entirely different books. I'm about to head to bed. It's after 12:30. I hope to post a pic blog about a multicultural festival tomorrow. But worry I'm being a blog-hog! hugs. :-)
Anish Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:25 PM
I have not driven a car for quite a few years. I used to have ared Ford Tempo. I never bought vainty plates or had a sports car. Hope you enjoy driving around in your new sedan. Where I live - NY's Lower East Side - a car is not a neccessity since you can take mass transit everywhere, I bet you must have a car where you live. Fun read! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Neels Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:49 PM
I feel your pain Andrea, enjoyed the theme you chose for the contest.. Wishing you all the best for Joann's contest ;) love Wilma
Johnson Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Driving down the coastal highway to breath the ocean air. Drove off the cliff and died. For what were meant to be glances, I mistook for stares.
Devnath  Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Many keep as antique piece, lovely image. Best of luck always in the contest. Loved always bl
Horne Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:48 AM
yes, I can see exactly where you're coming from, my friend - loved this thoughtful piece
Williams Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Andrea, like this, good luck in the contest, might try this when I get back, am having withdrawal symptoms being away all week, how lucky you are to be with Connie...see ya..David
Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 11:45 PM
reminds me of long trips, those memories, andie... an unusual, delightful write!.. enjoyed!..:) hugggs!
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