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Premium Member leftover

Peter (my bf) flew away early this morning,
like Shakespear’s eagle, “leaving no tracks.”
Now I lay here, as a leftover or Millais’ drowned ‘Ophelia.’

That’s an image ripped from adolescent, female visual culture.

Time‘s adversarial magic drags us ever future-wise,
eroding sweet moments we would cling to.

Shall we poetize?

I want a quiet afternoon,
on the bright side of the moon.

It’s an actual-factual place,
convenient, in close outer space,
like mythical Elysium, Shangri-La or Valhalla
where I’d still be intertwined with my fella,
like characters from literature or legend.

A place where “I’ll get to it tomorrow,”
is, alas, an everlasting pass,
because on the dusty, unreeling moon,
tomorrow never arrives,
our lovers never have to go,
and we can relax, scantily clothed,
simply enjoying the everlasting earthrise.
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Songs for this:
To The Moon by Meghan Trainor
Moon River by Frank Ocean

Premium Member Writing Is Being

since writing is being,
who the hell am I, 
measuring meter,
caring about perfect rhyme,
an attention seeker
trying to impress

writing is being
breathing
unreeling 
unraveling
unearthing
seeing 
hearing 
smelling
touching
feeling
e.e. 
        ("since feeling is first
         he who pays any attention
         to the syntax of things
         will never wholly kiss you;") *

since writing is being
can I just
be
stop pretending
and wholly kiss 
me
if I can't
how will I ever
wholly kiss you

* From "since feeling is first" by E.E. Cummings

Premium Member Dem Tiff Our Pikin - Child Trafficking

Dem Tiff Our Pikin

Child Trafficking



Her echoing screams

pierced the night

unreeling an impending woe             

rousing every slumbering soul

prompting a sudden madness

 

The other sits then strains   

looking out with earnest yearnings

 scarcely seeing the distance

streaming out the tears

 remembering many sorrows

as she recounts her story

 

This  one grows weary  

as her mind wanders off

overly flustered

by the seemly misty dust

stirred by roaming feet

scantily clothed  

barely holding on

bemused by this troubling reality

 grasping weakly

to her unbroken will

 

The other held on to fate

even as she alter her faith

squatting with a furrowed face

staring blankly at the beaming sun

regurgitating their last words

visualizing her lost world


Giving Him the Bird

I see your bright colored plumes and your cocky arrogant beak 
you think you got a trumpet in my ear but oh ,you wait and see 
how beautiful the end result will be, once you CLAMP 

It is no ones business but my own what I write and re-write in 
the name of perfection. Cat got your tongue? Well finally we 
got some peace round here, I'm entering IT 

Are you expecting those old parrot tapes to enter my heaven?
I'm busy inputting so I I can't hear your hell  
so fly away from me bird from Alcatraz cuz I'm not this,    OR 

That,                  
                        I will not listen anymore.    REMOVE 
that silly grin off your plucky face and give me room to be 
the best that I can be.  I'm unreeling, re-dealing, getting
ready for the authentic manuscript of the Century. So bird on 
you....                                            Get over  YOURSELF 
You don't own monopoly to my mind nor my imagination 
get going bird, I got it covered so pluck those poisoned feathers
off my back and let me grow wings, that won't harm or attack

leave me in peace to write . 
 
January 14, 2019

Premium Member Footprints

Footprints
Written: by Tom Wright
3/8/2016

Like a colossal spool of twine unreeling,
So are the tracks put down from birth.
They show our bearing, not what we’re feeling,
And are oft used in determining our worth;

But only God knows what our heart’s hold,
And if our trail was by Him so directed;
Whether our tracks are fresh laid or cold,
Our love for others from these is reflected

Old Songs

Old songs
Rippling across the yard like common leaves
Stirs me
Like the wind stirs trees to drop gold memory
I wonder now
Where have you all gone, doing what
Is it not easy to remember again
Do you brush tears like I do a gnat
Remembering joy really cause pain.

Old songs
Let them, spinning through faults and scratch
Night longs
For stars like chicken in a country yard to hatch
Whatever happened to those hens I had
I think I know, O too bad, too bad. So bad
I was powerless against the broken heart
Nature flying, flying like clouds apart.

Old songs
Let them play, the real unreeling the mind
Old songs
Playing on the edge of memory deeply blind
Tells the recurring tale of Sisyphus labour
The filling and outpouring, the empty valour
The ever recurring loss, and the storing
The collections of our loss, and storing, storing
The mood, the visions, memory
The ghost and image of history.


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