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leftover

Peter (my bf) flew away early this morning,
like Shakespear’s eagle, “leaving no tracks.”
Now I lay here, as a leftover or Millais’ drowned ‘Ophelia.’

That’s an image ripped from adolescent, female visual culture.

Time‘s adversarial magic drags us ever future-wise,
eroding sweet moments we would cling to.

Shall we poetize?

I want a quiet afternoon,
on the bright side of the moon.

It’s an actual-factual place,
convenient, in close outer space,
like mythical Elysium, Shangri-La or Valhalla
where I’d still be intertwined with my fella,
like characters from literature or legend.

A place where “I’ll get to it tomorrow,”
is, alas, an everlasting pass,
because on the dusty, unreeling moon,
tomorrow never arrives,
our lovers never have to go,
and we can relax, scantily clothed,
simply enjoying the everlasting earthrise.
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Songs for this:
To The Moon by Meghan Trainor
Moon River by Frank Ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kavanagh  Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 2:48 PM
Frosted flakes (crunchy for morning munchies) I best stick to my day job, hey any of those cool white coats (leftover) around the labs, I’m an XL, have a few erm weather experiments to conduct =]
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 1:00 PM
You actually give the moon a much needed atmosphere in this beautifully penned piece Anais, (Time‘s adversarial magic drags us ever future-wise) sounds much more palatable than plain old entropy destroying the universe, brilliant cheers David
Vionet Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 7:06 PM
You write to a lot of contest prompts. That seems like writing to spec - maybe you should be in advertising? The ask was “Write a 4 word poem about Frosted Flakes,” so David took out his lucky pen. =]
Vionet Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 6:34 PM
Oh, in my fantasy, there’s a Mandarin Oriental Lunar habitation (hotel) and Avenue Montaigne (mall). =]
Parker Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 8:53 PM
Poetize indeed, AV. Moondust for covers, BF as lover, so much to discover. Lovely. :o))
Vionet Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 5:24 AM
Thank you!
Conn Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 1:56 PM
If you stick that lip out any further a pigeons going to land on it.
Vionet Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 4:18 PM
And give up the delicious pigeon buffalo wings?? You must B cRaZy, boy!
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