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SIX WOMEN PATIENTS

   SIX WOMEN PATIENTS 

Six broken women lay down to rest
brown bodies all in a row
six long stories to tell with jest
six smiles with a million tears
race around ward releasing fears 
just so

Six windows uncurtained offers 
six sunny acacias buffered 
trolleys reel, pills and bottles steep
surgeon makes his rounds with a nod
six students in tow
asking six silly questions to know
just so

Six hard beds high, sigh-slept many
linen stiff as a new penny 
squishy meal of mieliepap mixed veggies
making six quite edgy
whose next for operation table no-one knows
they can though still touch their toes
just so

six sets of eyes close for night
dream of kids, chicken pie, golden flights
needles, nurses, morphine gone
no slips on escalator or hip joint pain
they reconnect their own wires, abiding fires
flowing into Aegian sea as African queens

awake back in ward, still here
wee patients not free, see ?
Matron says ‘Go pee’
just so

Premium Member She Outdid Humbug Wizadry


Toto uncurtained Oz's stagey play,
his humbug wizardry didn't go astray.
      In a balloon he vanished,
      lone Dorothy felt banished,
on silver shoes she flew home all the way.


Premium Member - Lily of the Valley -

Filled with delightful sweet perfume - always opportunities to share


                                            alluring flower
                                    your uniqueness is dazzling -
                                         tiny white bells ring


                             Beauty, innocence and purity as a dove
                               Uncurtained window by nature's love
                                Trust your heart, please be my wife
                                 Lily of the valley, the elixer of life





29.05.2023
Anne-Lise Andresen
Copyright © All Rights Reserved

A Monoku, Haiku and 4 lines of Rhyme 
3rd place in the contest
- Same Theme Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

* Lily of the valley is best known in herbal medicine as a heart medicine

Uncurtained Widows

Through the uncurtained widows
Of life we see hope rise and fall like
A knife

Through a shrill scream 
Of a darkened dream 
We feel thrills

And hopes rising higher
Like flames of midnight desires 
Only to awaken to the same

As hopes falling 
Tripping down over lifes
Games 
Whips upon my back 
Silence upon my tongue

As my mind whispers in the silence
Of my head
Sleep please hold me upon my bed

For my visel feels strangle
Trapped between
A dream and realty
A dreamer who only feels alive

Within a dream..
Hear the silence whisper's
Within my head..

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