She Outdid Humbug Wizadry


Toto uncurtained Oz's stagey play,
his humbug wizardry didn't go astray.
      In a balloon he vanished,
      lone Dorothy felt banished,
on silver shoes she flew home all the way.
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Messina Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Nicely done. Subimal. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Charlie
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Thank you, Charles for the placement. Happy holidays to you and yours.
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 11:11 PM
I thought her shoes were red but it has been a long long time since I watched the movie. You did a cute job with this one
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 12:02 PM
Oh that’s a different take!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 1:23 PM
I thought so. Thank you for your read.
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