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EXTERMINATION

They are dirty, they are unclean, they need to be exterminated she explained to me. I was a ride share driver and picked up a women, she explained she came from a ….. country to get educated and was now living in Boston area, she supported abortion and other forms of human extermination of unclean people, she explained that since these children and people were created uncleanly they therefore needed to be exterminated. Today I still think about this conversation with her, and I pray for the many she will try to influence to die for her belief. Always choose life and protect it,life is a gift and a blessing, so value it, protect it, and cherish every day. Lifting prayers to God, today and always.

Pomegranates aren’t messy

pomegranates aren’t messy. 
there quite a few
who don’t have a clue 
of how to handle the delicate fruit 
so it doesn’t spew

They take one look 
And determine its some type of crook 
don’t even take a moment 
To observe its unique tidiness
 
They take a spoon 
And don’t wait to gut it 
To make it messy 
And leave it until it’s uncleanly
they don’t take the time 
Out of their lives 
To hold it steady 
And make sure it’s ready 

They take and take 
The red color staining their fingers 
They wipe it on a towel, maybe a few 
Going on with their day 
Still not having a clue
 
Pomegranates aren’t messy 
your poetry just sucks 
Because if you take
What one offers 
You’ll see it’s unique tidiness
 
One it rewards to those who 
Don’t rush
And take the time out of their lives 
To hold it relentlessly 
So no, pomegranate aren’t messy 
They just need to be handled gently.

Premium Member Let's See What's In the Laundry Hamper- -

Let's SEE What's in the laundry hamper?

" One a soiled cloth diapers
a fierce icky stinkysocks
some noxious obnoxious unclean towels
horrid stinking under-shorts
unappetizing horrible awful grubby baby bibs 
Oh, my some mephitic nauseating obscene panties.
Musty nauseating odious under shirts
soiled squalid uncleanly pants and jeans
awful dirty filthy blouses and dresses


guess I’d better presoak and presort some of this mess???


9/27/19
Written by James Edward Lee Sr. 2019©


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