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The Sorrowful Unbaked Cookie Heart

and snow dream)tears!Shout   i'm an over/undone heart
    sweet muffin bird-like  feathers tickle me
the streaked glass-water:
 flowers between summer   hearts struck my eyes,
  lips so tenderly crushing stones(h-u-r-t) dreams
  oooh, sir!  the proper name you sang
  when speaking to me!
so -- Victorian girl
  )oh god -- keeping me
    sheeps like lamps  covering dark nights
a water colored canvas   m e a n i n g
  love is what we   denied twice.
i broke my soul    in a shout
forgetting un. der (lies)
i'm a self-crumbling
cookie unbaked
  will you eat me?
no.  i crumble

:: 03-12-2015 ::

The Sorrowful Unbaked Cookie Heart

and snow dream)tears!Shout
i'm an over/undone heart
    sweet muffin bird-like
feathers tickle me
the streaked glass-water:
 flowers between summer
 hearts struck my eyes,
  lips so tenderly crushing
stones(h-u-r-t) dreams
  oooh, sir!
the proper name you sang
  when speaking to me!
so -- Victorian girl
  )oh god -- keeping me
    sheeps like lamps
 covering dark nights
a water colored canvas
m e a n i n g
  love is what we 
  denied twice.
i broke my soul
  in a shout
forgetting 
un. der (lies)
i'm a self-crumbling
cookie unbaked
  will you eat me?
no.  i crumble

:: 03-12-2015 ::

If There Was No Poetry

if there was no poetry
then what would become
of my fledgling thoughts
unbaked as they are
raw

this mish-mash of words
words 
words
words I’ve barely stirred

i have made them presentable
readied them to be penned
they all wait proudly
showing their finest
how versatile they can be
wanting to be chosen

metaphors so clever
phrases perfectly turned
runes waiting for attribution
clichés anticipating new life

would my gift for schtick
never get the chance to evoke
the laughs I so crave
oh! what a terrible curse
to have my pen stilled

where would I put the 
clatter in my head
if not into poetry
each precious word a chick nudged
from its nest
all my babies: some fly, some fall flat
splat!

i am mother to these fledglings
watchful, hopeful, shaping them
helping them fulfill their potential
and when they take flight
avoiding the fate of Icarus
they save me
for a moment
they save me
from the madness 
of 
the world


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