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If There Was No Poetry

if there was no poetry then what would become of my fledgling thoughts unbaked as they are raw this mish-mash of words words words words I’ve barely stirred i have made them presentable readied them to be penned they all wait proudly showing their finest how versatile they can be wanting to be chosen metaphors so clever phrases perfectly turned runes waiting for attribution clichés anticipating new life would my gift for schtick never get the chance to evoke the laughs I so crave oh! what a terrible curse to have my pen stilled where would I put the clatter in my head if not into poetry each precious word a chick nudged from its nest all my babies: some fly, some fall flat splat! i am mother to these fledglings watchful, hopeful, shaping them helping them fulfill their potential and when they take flight avoiding the fate of Icarus they save me for a moment they save me from the madness of the world

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Date: 3/14/2014 2:11:00 AM
Can I post this poem on my noncommercial blog: healinghamlet(dot)com? Healing Hamlet focuses on healing and art (visual, music and writing). I will give credit to you and a link to this page or any other webpage. Please let me know if you have concerns.
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Anita Price
Date: 3/19/2014 11:02:00 AM
Thank you! Here is the link: http://healinghamlet.com/healing-quotes-and-poems/poetry/ And here is the FB page link: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Healing-Hamlet/473389302688953?ref=hl Thank you for sharing your gift! Best, Anita
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Tess Norton
Date: 3/14/2014 12:40:00 PM
Anita, yes, you may post this on healinghamlet.com with a link to Poetrysoup.com. I visited the site - it's cool - I liked it a lot and enjoyed the content and its message! Thank you for thinking my poem would be a good addition to the blog! Tess
Date: 1/20/2014 9:28:00 PM
Thanks, David! Yes, aren't we always a bit ambiguous about letting go of our work? But so proud when it soars?
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Date: 1/14/2014 8:32:00 PM
Very clever write on our little fledging poems...where both men and women can give birth, in a way.
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