Tidies Poems


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Hampered decades withered wasted
         Filtered faint supposed adult phases
         Thumb stuck under parental watch
         Otherwise valid options squashed

          Tip toe inhibit, always present parents
          Lame version of living, aged thirty seven
          Stagnated, restricted mentality of boy
          Stranger to poinant beckon, own voice

         Girlfriend experience has to be paid for
         Without privacy, mature desires unable
         To explore collected life's excitement 
         Warranted ability boxed and frightened 

          Nightly dinner served, bed Mum tidies
          Long spanning dependance, care relying
          On compassion, viewed incompetence 
          Spun by insulting cyclic denial's dance

          Worked fifteen years for family business 
          Residing rent free, secure job benefits 
          Have a five bedroom house in next suburb 
          Sits always untenanted to avoid trouble 

          Your foresight surely conjurs panic
          Soon elderly parents may not manage
          Destined to remain home, become their carer
          Tiny limit of terrified world takes you nowhere
Categories: tidies, age, character, destiny, growing
Form: Couplet

Wonder Woman

She is a bread winner,
who takes care of her family,
is it any wonder,
she still has her sanity,
she takes any new job
like a duck to water,
she is more than likely
your wife, Mom or daughter,
working full time 40 hours
plus each and every week,
afterwards doing the chores,
the house, tidies up and keeps,
goes grocery shopping
to keep the cupboards full,
pays the bills on time,
worries about the emptying till,
will not borrow from
Paul to pay her Peter,
is stubborn in that regard,
as she steps up or down
her monetary ladder,
at times feels like atlas,
carrying all the weight,
you can tell by looking at her
she has got a lot on her plate,
thats why she looks forward
so much to the weekends,
like going on a retreat,
she gets a much needed
vacation,
unfortunately her weekends
abruptly come to an end,
and by the time she spins around,
has to start all over again.
Categories: tidies, family, jobs, women,
Form: Light Verse


Olga Ivanova

OLGA       IVANOVA


Each day when I get to the office for a coffee fix,
A minor underling,   an immigrant office-cleaner,  
Olga  Ivanova,  greets me.  She’s  been at  work since six
And  off her floor you could eat your dinner.

Her bus  takes an hour after a  rain-soaked queue,
Leaving  three small kids  - abandoned by spouse -
In a  cheap rented apartment near the zoo,
Where she looks after his sick mum too  -  that louse.

Tidies the reception area of  the  whole department;
Specially  keeps  office-copy of  the daily paper for me;
Always says good evening,  smiles  acknowledgement
And  hands  it to me as  I  leave at  five - oh -  three.
Categories: tidies, people
Form: Quatrain

Dishes

The dishes pile up stained with the day to day of life
Her hands are chapped and dry withered from washing them
Dishes of food, dishes of mundanity
relentless dishes calling to be cleaned

Dishes prepared with love dishes for the family
dishes smashed in anger, broken in frustration
the dishes are her forte, she knows the dishes well

her hands are red and inflamed
sore from scrubbing at the remnants of her life
how many dishes has she washed anyway
how many hours of her life has she lost

Unseen she scurries and tidies
washing and drying, washing and dryng
swallowing her rage and her long lost dreams

The dishes are her forte, she knows the dishes well
the dirt, the leftovers, the many requests of her  
washing and drying, washing and drying
but nobody cares to notice
Categories: tidies, angstday,
Form: I do not know?

The Worlds Greatest Invention

I’ve got a great invention
I use it all the time
It does the things that I should do
It always works just fine

It cleans my room it tidies up
And puts my stuff away
Does chores I don’t have time to do
So I can go and play

I never have to worry
If I run a little late
I find my meals are cooked for me
And ready on a plate

It doesn’t  need much maintenance
To make it sweetly hum
Just a little oiling, 
With the words “I love you mum”

© John W Fenn  14-02-2009
Categories: tidies, daughter, family, children, funny,
Form: I do not know?


Time, Take Me Away

Peering out my bedroom window, 
alarm clock's beeping time away. 
although the hour's ticking on 
time has stopped; forever gone... 

a burning torch has lit the sky 
field mice toil through cedar pine 
a parrot tidies up her nest 
hatchlings clamor at her breast. 

In my mind, I've drifted off 
to places where "old" time can't go. 
I daydream here and stay a spell 
however long, I could not tell... 

enshrouded in a cloud of dust, 
streetlamps warm sand flies. 
rain clouds slip behind the moon. 
tree frogs croak in tune. 

I can't remember where I went 
or how long I'd been gone. 
but here, I'll linger knowing I'm 
just fond of wasting time...
Categories: tidies, lifetime,
Form: Prose Poetry

Lost Nor Found

As I lie in this box all dirty and scuffed
I remember the time I was shiny and fluffed
Alone and forgotten I doubt that is true
For I was once savored in red white and blue

Although it may seem it was a long time ago
I once flew through the air in many a show
I was waved at through crowds as I proudly appeared
So high I did blow and to many was feared

There's no need to worry I'll be back once again
I dislike this box and I do miss the wind
Why must I wait until the fourth of July
For I am grand it's my duty to fly

Until then I will stay my memories in bloom
Maybe the maid will free me when she tidies the room
It's true that she likes me she flew me last spring
Some sort of occasion a Memorial thing

This can't be my destiny for I stand for the truth
I'm not just a toy what's wrong with our youth
I hear them play music of hate and it hurts
I am used to large stadiums and enormous concerts

How I long for the trumpet a victorious sound
Still I'm here when you're ready not lost nor found
Categories: tidies, america, confusion, history, memorial,
Form: Rhyme
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