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The worlds greatest invention

I’ve got a great invention I use it all the time It does the things that I should do It always works just fine It cleans my room it tidies up And puts my stuff away Does chores I don’t have time to do So I can go and play I never have to worry If I run a little late I find my meals are cooked for me And ready on a plate It doesn’t need much maintenance To make it sweetly hum Just a little oiling, With the words “I love you mum” © John W Fenn 14-02-2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 8/26/2009 11:05:00 PM
Haha! Yes, you've figured it out. Now, if you could find a wife who wants you to call her Mum! (Or, perhaps you're too young, yet?) Hugs, Donna
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:53:00 PM
I am rolling on the floor laughing my fanny off at this one John. Used and abused I think it is called. Awesome write. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:49:00 PM
Aww this is sweet. Hurray for moms!
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:26:00 PM
Yeah! Right! I am a mom and grandmom and we know that we are being used. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/26/2009 2:09:00 PM
cute and descriptive!! Joshua
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