chakras hitherto ignored now pulsate
all polarised nodes wish to merge with source
manner of change varies as does blink rate
all accomplished without the use of force
kundalini being our sole resource
that as subject and object become one
all we are aware of is bliss beat’s hum
when the new normal is rapturous bliss
as that that does not come and go or fade
it makes the void a luminous abyss
an ethereal mist in which we wade
in the timeless now for us readymade
is-ness of being-ness has a new name
a tempest of delight we cannot tame
Life’s a lucid dream where we are in trance,
so we reflect on musings created,
in imaginary realms where we dance,
our roles shape shifting, stooped stance sedated,
at times sorrowful, at times elated.
Having not made love and light our mainstay,
our dreams betray that we have lost our way.
third eye to crown becomes a seamless whole
thus the concept of chakras is destroyed
we playfully go about our life role
shining as pure consciousness unalloyed
vibrant in aloneness in the vast void
witnessing, noticing, celebrating
hum of kundalini unabating
Believers and non-believers collide
Where hope and bridges are built to unite
Swords and blades sparring in stark, open side
Oil in flames devouring grounds that ignite.
Pillars and towers of creeds in graphite
Melting away like rhyolite of quartz
Freezing as ornaments, crystallized parts.
We need no map for we dwell in the gap,
carried by currents of bliss magnetism,
having since discerned that thoughts are a trap,
blocking grace from igniting body prism,
so path of silence is our chosen ism.
We are both the oneness field and this urn,
where draped in bliss mists we willingly burn.
assuming our heart is satiated
we shed our mask and don a cloak of light
commingled with bliss beats unabated
that thus beyond space-time drenched in delight
we look at the world afresh with clear sight
but although now diminished is our fear
we nurture desire so we are still here
in moments when unfocused is our gaze
yet our attention is animated
the veil of space thins wherein if we laze
with no agenda by presence stated
the pulsations of bliss unabated
positions us in peace tranquil and deep
readying us for a consciousness leap
all conflicts must be healed by love alone
are the words our exalted master spoke
seems our consciousness we still need to hone
atone as head and heart to God we yoke
for it is now high time that we awoke
so we remind ourself life is a school
where emitting love is the only rule
bliss borne joy is held, poised yet pulsating
though chakras manifest, it is one grid
hum of magnetism is unabating
vibrant stillness on which we place our bid
for God to reveal truth our ego hid
this morn focus is on spine and forehead
merged with crown and heart, where bliss mists are bred
there is this secret motion in stillness
drenched in divine bliss mists we feel complete
call it if you will, our path to wellness
wherein each pore is suffused with cool heat
throbbing in sync with God’s sublime bliss beat
meditation that defies translation
elation in the void of cessation
A burn that is bliss, as flame without smoke,
transmutes our quintessence from deep within,
brought about when presence with love we yoke,
which causes this ignition to begin,
where the vast void beckons us to come in,
being absoluteness where we belong,
where pulse of life is sensed as God’s Om gong.
the soles of our feet make contact with earth
whilst purified palms radiate bliss heat
each breath intake represents our rebirth
resplendent with vibrance feeling upbeat
throb of blissfulness that does not deplete
with all nodes entwined acting as a whole
we transform as light all scriptures extol
our focus playfully shifts anywhere
although in truth it goes nowhere at all
for all is one when polarities pair
soundless thunder breaking down every wall
where all that then remains is a bliss squall
in which as living light we stand erect
our vision clear and our soul’s stance perfect
Eight billion souls mirroring God’s heartbeat,
granted full freedom to act as they please,
estranged from source find love and light deplete,
until shape shifting desires they release,
whence flowing with ease like the morning breeze,
they take a step back to stop flow of time,
dissolving presence in love’s bliss beat chime.
active at all times, is our soul star node
as we sense therefrom God’s blessings in-pour
this form is readied to be His abode
so we burn in this urn but keep no score
afloat in the boat God Himself does oar
we’re breath by breath by bliss magnetism led
in truth leaving nothing more to be said
Introduction
The special pleasure of reading Rhyme Royal comes from feeling a stanza advance and settle at the same time. Its interwoven echoes keep thought in motion, while the concluding couplet promises a degree of arrival. A poet may honor that promise with resolution, resist it with ambiguity, or use the last two lines to reinterpret everything that came before. That tension gives each poem a compact dramatic life.
As you browse the community poems, you may encounter intimate lyrics, compressed stories, meditations, character speeches, comic observations, and grave reflections. Some writers emphasize a stately cadence; others let conversational phrasing push against the underlying measure. One poet may make the rhymes nearly invisible, while another foregrounds them for wit, ceremony, or emotional insistence. In a sequence of stanzas, each couplet can become a temporary landing before the next stanza reopens the journey.
Reading several examples side by side reveals choices that an isolated poem cannot fully display. Compare how different poets distribute attention across the stanza, prepare the final couplet, and select rhyme words capable of carrying meaning rather than merely completing a pattern. Notice, too, whether the poem feels divided into stages or unfolds as one sustained sentence. The form provides recognizable pressure, but that pressure does not produce identical results. Read beyond the first example and consider how each poet interprets closure, movement, voice, and tonal balance within the same demanding architecture.
Reading Guide
Begin by reading each poem for its emotional or narrative movement before examining its formal workmanship. A successful Rhyme Royal should not feel like seven separate lines assembled around matching sounds; it should feel like a developing thought whose sound pattern intensifies expectation. On a second reading, listen for where the poem pauses, accelerates, pivots, or withholds completion. Then compare several community poems to discover how the same architecture can support decisiveness, suspense, irony, grief, argument, or songlike poise.
- The opening promise: Notice what the first lines establish: a scene, claim, question, voice, or conflict. Because the stanza has limited room to develop, an unfocused opening can weaken everything that follows. Ask: what kind of ending does this beginning lead me to expect?
- The returning rhyme sounds: Listen not only for accuracy but for the emotional color of each rhyme family. The sound that recurs most insistently can bind distant ideas together or make a key feeling difficult to escape. Ask: do the repeated sounds deepen meaning, or merely announce the pattern?
- The hinge near the stanza's later middle: Watch for a line that both completes an earlier movement and opens the path toward the couplet. This position can support a revelation, complication, or change of tone. Ask: where does the poem stop developing its premise and begin preparing its consequence?
- Syntax across line endings: Some poets let sentences coincide with the rhymes, producing ceremony and control; others use enjambment to pull the reader through expected stopping points. Ask: does the phrasing make the form feel measured, urgent, hesitant, or deliberately unstable?
- Cadence and spoken voice: Listen for the relationship between natural speech and the underlying five-beat expectation. Small rhythmic departures can emphasize a name, denial, shock, or emotional stumble. Ask: which words receive unusual stress, and what does that emphasis reveal about the speaker?
- The work of the couplet: Determine whether the final pair summarizes, judges, overturns, enlarges, or refuses the preceding thought. A polished rhyme can sound final even when the meaning remains unsettled. Ask: does the ending earn its authority, or close the poem too neatly?
- Movement between stanzas: In longer poems, notice how each local closure relates to the next beginning. Repeated arrivals can create narrative stages, meditative waves, or mounting pressure. Ask: does the next stanza reopen a question, shift perspective, or advance the action?
After these close readings, return to the poem as a whole. The most revealing comparison is not which poet follows expectations most visibly, but how each writer turns those expectations into a particular experience of movement and arrival.
Writing Tips
Approach a Rhyme Royal stanza as a small chamber for thought rather than a container to be filled line by line. Before drafting, identify what must change between the opening and the couplet: knowledge, mood, judgment, relationship, or dramatic circumstance. That movement will give the formal pattern a purpose. A rhyme plan can guide composition, but the poem should appear to discover its ending rather than march mechanically toward it.
- Choose material with a turn inside it. A static description may run out of energy before the closing pair. Select a moment that can be presented, complicated, and reconsidered: a decision, recollection, accusation, encounter, or change in perception. For larger stories, let each stanza handle one meaningful stage.
- Sketch the rhetorical movement first. Write a prose note describing what the stanza must accomplish at the beginning, hinge, and close. This prevents a common beginner mistake: stretching a simple statement with filler simply because more patterned lines are required.
- Build rhyme families around meaning. Gather possible end words before composing, then group them by image, action, and emotional association. Reject words that demand inverted syntax, archaic phrasing, or a detour from the subject. The strongest rhyme word is not merely available; it changes what the line can say.
- Give the most persistent rhyme varied work. Because one sound returns with particular insistence, avoid using it for three interchangeable nouns or predictable abstractions. Let its appearances move through different grammatical or emotional functions so repetition produces development rather than sameness.
- Balance measure with believable speech. Draft for the voice you want, then shape the rhythm without flattening its personality. A perfectly regular line may support dignity or calm, but uninterrupted regularity can become sing-song. Controlled substitutions are most effective when they coincide with pressure in the speaker's thought.
- Use enjambment deliberately. Running a sentence across a rhyme can keep the reader from pausing too heavily and can make an obvious end word less conspicuous. End-stopping, by contrast, can create authority, hesitation, or ritual. Vary the two according to the poem's emotional pace rather than by accident.
- Let images carry the architecture. Instead of explaining a feeling and then rhyming the explanation, place concrete images at structurally important moments. An object introduced early can return transformed near the close, allowing the pattern to register as memory or consequence.
- Resist the automatic moral. The couplet naturally attracts summary, epigram, and verdict. Those effects can be powerful, but an ending that simply restates the stanza often feels smaller than its preparation. Consider a counterimage, altered perspective, or precise consequence that completes the movement without explaining it away.
- Plan renewed momentum in a sequence. If the poem uses several stanzas, avoid making every couplet sound equally final. Vary the degree of closure: one may suspend action, another may deliver judgment, and another may send an image forward into the next stanza.
During revision, read the draft aloud twice: first without stopping at line endings, then with attention to every rhyme and cadence. Circle the end words, mark awkward stresses, and note any sentence included only to satisfy the pattern. Ask a reader where the poem seems to turn and whether the couplet feels prepared but not predetermined. Replace forced diction, sharpen the central images, and preserve rhythmic irregularities only when the voice or meaning benefits from them.
Interesting Facts
- Its odd-numbered shape creates productive imbalance. The stanza cannot divide into two equal halves, so readers often feel a subtle pull toward a hinge or turn. Poets can exploit that imbalance by delaying the main revelation or allowing one thought to overlap the next.
- One rhyme family bears more memory pressure than the others. Its repeated return can make linked words feel fated, obsessive, comic, or ceremonial. Careful poets choose those words as a semantic sequence, not simply as three convenient sound matches.
- The couplet can close sound without closing meaning. Two strongly matched endings create an audible sense of arrival, yet the thought may remain morally uncertain or emotionally unresolved. This difference between sonic finality and interpretive openness is one of the form's richest possibilities.
- Enjambment can temporarily disguise the architecture. When syntax flows past a rhyme, the reader is carried forward before fully registering the echo. This lets a poet retain formal coherence while avoiding a heavily segmented or overly ceremonial delivery.
- Rhythmic variation becomes especially noticeable against a poised background. A sudden stress, shortened phrase, or syntactic interruption can embody anger, fear, disbelief, or intimacy. The departure works because the surrounding cadence has established an expectation for it to disturb.
- A sequence changes the meaning of closure. In a single stanza, the final pair may feel conclusive. In a longer poem, each couplet can function as a ledge rather than a destination. Browse the community poems to compare how writers sustain momentum after these repeated moments of apparent arrival.
Popular Themes
Subject and form become most interesting when they place useful pressure on each other. Rhyme Royal favors material that can develop through linked statements and arrive at a charged final pair, but that arrival need not be a simple solution. The following themes are literary possibilities, not measured rankings of what appears most often in the collection.
- Moral choice and divided loyalty: A speaker can present competing duties, complicate an initial judgment, and use the couplet for a decision or a final recognition that no decision is clean.
- Love, estrangement, and reconciliation: Returning sounds suit emotions that circle the same memory while changing their interpretation. The ending may offer reunion, rejection, resignation, or an ironic contrast between what is said and what remains desired.
- Narrative crisis and adventure: The stanza can frame a compact scene with preparation, action, and consequence. In a sequence, successive couplets provide temporary vantage points from which the story can change direction.
- Grief and remembrance: Interlaced echoes can suggest the mind's repeated return to a person, place, or event. A final couplet may become a memorial inscription, but restraint often gives it more force than direct explanation.
- Satire and social observation: The form's poise can contrast sharply with foolish behavior or public hypocrisy. Carefully delayed rhymes create anticipation, while the closing pair can deliver a sting, reversal, or deceptively courteous judgment.
- Devotion and contemplation: The measured progression supports sustained attention to doubt, gratitude, awe, or spiritual conflict. The couplet can sound prayerful, yet it can also preserve an unanswered question rather than claiming certainty.
- Nature, season, and transformation: A sequence of concrete changes can lead toward an altered understanding of time or self. Images placed at rhyming endpoints may create correspondences between landscape and inward experience without requiring explicit comparison.
As you read the community poems, compare writers who approach similar subjects. Notice how one poet makes a couplet decisive while another leaves it open, or how the same kind of image becomes narrative evidence, comic detail, or emotional symbol. Shared themes make individual choices easier to see.
Editorial Insights
The central artistic tension in Rhyme Royal lies between propulsion and settlement. Its interwoven sound pattern encourages the reader to carry earlier words forward, while the closing pair exerts a strong gravitational pull toward conclusion. A merely recognizable example displays both effects. A memorable poem makes them inseparable from its subject: the returning sounds may enact fixation, argument, pursuit, recollection, or inevitability, and the couplet arrives because the poem's thought has reached a genuine threshold.
Structure feels necessary when each formal recurrence also marks development. A rhyme word should not simply answer an earlier sound; it should revise, intensify, or complicate the earlier word's meaning. Likewise, the later middle of the stanza should do more than bridge the opening and close. It often carries the crucial burden of changing direction without making the turn feel announced. Editors and attentive readers notice when syntax, imagery, cadence, and rhetorical movement converge there. They also notice when the final couplet gathers details already present instead of attaching a detachable moral.
The most common weaknesses arise when the pattern becomes more visible than the poem. Predictable rhyme pairs can make the destination obvious too early. Forced inversions and vague abstractions signal that sound has overruled sense. Mechanical end-stopping can break a living statement into equal verbal blocks, while excessive enjambment may conceal the form so thoroughly that its moments of arrival lose force. Another danger is insufficient development: a poet may spend most of the stanza repeating a premise and then ask the couplet to provide all the insight. Over-explanation creates the opposite problem, leaving the ending nothing to reveal.
Individuality remains visible through the speaker's habits of attention. One poet may favor lucid narrative progression; another may create a knotted dramatic monologue, a restrained elegy, or a lightly comic argument. Distinction comes from sentence shape, image selection, tonal risk, and the precise relationship between spoken voice and measured cadence-not from rejecting convention for its own sake. Comparing multiple community poems develops judgment because it separates the shared architecture from the choices made within it. Readers begin to hear which endings are merely tidy, which surprises are unprepared, and which poems transform formal expectation into emotional or intellectual necessity.
Read, Write & Share
Read several community poems before deciding what Rhyme Royal can do. Compare the ways poets manage the stanza's hinge, recurring sounds, spoken cadence, and closing couplet; the contrasts are often as instructive as the similarities. When a poem holds your attention, leave a thoughtful comment about a specific image, turn, rhythmic choice, or ending.
Then try shaping your own subject through the form's pressure. Draft for movement rather than mere compliance, revise aloud, and publish the finished poem on PoetrySoup. Your interpretation can extend the conversation by showing other readers how familiar conventions acquire a new voice.
Collection Statistics
This collection contains 878 Rhyme Royal poems, offering substantial room to compare approaches to voice, pacing, rhyme, narrative movement, and closure. Within a collection of this size, readers can encounter poets who follow familiar conventions closely, adapt them to contemporary speech, or challenge expectations while retaining a recognizable relationship to the form. Browse multiple entries to see how shared constraints can produce markedly different poetic decisions.
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