Remonstrated Poems | Examples


Balls

When first I went ten-pin bowling
was in a league of my own
tho' hot to trot my score was shot
splits and gutterballs set the tone
my opponent bowled professionally
outclassed before I'd begun
she demonstrated then remonstrated
“It's not 'only a game' to some!”
tho' bet my set I'd met my match
when playing each frame for a round
looked like I'm paying heard me saying
"The next one's on me, I'll be bound."
with a spin a difficult situation
unlikely to escape she placed me in
and looking down the lane found myself
once more behind the eight pin
Categories: remonstrated, fun, games, humor, humorous,
Form: Rhyme

cassock dance

Cassock dance 

The heaven hangs low today, just above
the spire of the village church, which
is closed since the priest hung himself 
in the vestry.
He drank, you see
lifted his cassock and danced 
lost respect among the parishioners
he had humiliated them
the men in the bar gave him whisky to drink
and he danced like a drunken tart.
The bishop remonstrated with the fallen
who promised to do better
He was seen in prone before the cross
Pale and suffering, etched into his still
handsome face, women said he looked
Jesus, when the ladies of mercy took 
him down and cleaned his wounds
Alas, the call from the bar grew louder 
intolerable 
a breeze from the open window 
he danced the last waltz in the vestry
Categories: remonstrated, anti bullying, beach, color,
Form: Blank verse


Remorseful Delight

When God at first made man,
With adjustment of variant plan.
"O Come " said he,beyond the orb.
That all creativity be not fall.

Then he summoned the dust,
For an improptu gathering of trust.
"Soil,by my palm arise",he' said.
AnD in succession gAve a token of his
breath.

Now the breath he gave had been rent:
Some for his glory,some make him wept.
"Shouldn't i have given him my breath" he
remonstrated:
For few regard but many disregarded.

Then he looked awhile toward the fulfilment
of his plan:
'2 minutes to his return',he heave a sigh.
         07:10:17
Categories: remonstrated, allusion,
Form: Sonnet

Bishop's Anoyance

The bishop said it was such a disgrace
That the minister's horse lacked much pace,
   He remonstrated it was a cardinal sin
    When you put the church's money in
  And it finishes last in a six furlong race.
Categories: remonstrated, funny, religion,
Form: Limerick
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