Rake Off Poems | Examples


Something Left Over

It must have been made
and rejected
in times grinding gears –
a knobby irregularity,
a leftover of smelt and dross.

This is all there is
a gobbet of oven clinker,
but behind it I sense cracked teeth,
soot seared across burnt eyeglasses,
blackened bones,
for after the gas came the flames.

Here it is,
a fragment long convulsed
from its own incineration,
an irregular rake-off, smithereens
dragged across a blind stone floor.

This tittle of slag once had to fit something
the rough rim of an iron door perhaps
behind which an old furnace
still cools in faraway minds.
A ferrous chip chiseled from a gulag,
or a souvenir from an SS campfire meet.

There is always something left
after the unthinkable,
always some spicule of irregularity,
detritus to explain or confound
as we toss it back into the fire again.
Categories: rake off, poetry,
Form: Free verse

Something Left Over

It must have been made
and rejected,
in night’s grinding gears –
a knobby irregularity,
a leftover of smelt and dross.

This is all there is
a gobbet of oven clinker,
but behind it I sense cracked teeth, 
motes in a burnt eyeglass,
the thin singed bones 
of fledgling flights into darkness.

Here it is,
a fragment long convulsed 
from its own incineration,
an irregular rake-off, a detritus 
dragged across a blind stone floor.

This tittle of slag once had to fit something
the rough rim of an iron door perhaps
behind which an old furnace
still cools in faraway minds.
A ferrous chip chiseled from a gulag,
or a souvenir from an SS campfire meet.

There is always something left
after the unthinkable
is thought upon,
always some spicule of irregularity 
to explain or confound
as we toss it back into the fire again.
Categories: rake off, poetry,
Form: Free verse


Peace From Misfortune

All is good 
All is great
but it would be better if I hadn't made a mistake
Only if I did not eat that raw steak on my plate and went at a slow pace
Though my actions were fake, I didn't hesitate to tell my mate that I failed at the objective I was trying to create
I can't rake off the fact that I lied even if I tried to undo my misfortune
The cookie crumbled at my feet and I couldn't retreat from the new custom
It was bound to happen
Now I'm laughing that I survived the round
Categories: rake off, life,
Form: Personification
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