Quietudes Poems | Examples


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Premium Member A Modest Enemy

The argument of silence, absonant,
hammers into the pliant mind it’s hard
nails of craving.—a spirit thusly marred
will yield to any prickle, every scant

pressure to give in.—once the foreign implant
is firmly riveted, a brain so jarred
can no longer trust its levies to guard
its thoughts against the inner, speechless “can’t”.

Quietudes disturb the peace of silent
folk, pounding its forceful will upon their backs.
When, going unfulfilled, a lurching tic
tickles the unstilled ego, its violent
lashes thrash harsh whips in frequent attacks
on the tender flesh of a crooked back.

Premium Member Vettriano Musings

surreal
      fragments
from the past
visual 
          encounters
           with dark fantasies
plots
   without dialogue
small drama
with
       strangers
on the
seashore

coincidences 
chimed
     in passion
           desire
           & indulgences
in virtue&
             vice

pursued 
     by umbrellas
      &trilbies
by ladies
        of the night
in mackintoshes &
                           braces

meditations
  in
     sunshine
reflections
   in
      mirrors
of bowlers&
beaches

melancholia
       in moments
               of colour
veiled
  in the enigmatic
longings
for yesterday
                     today
in nostalgic
      roads
       to nowhere
of quietudes
in hidden
    stylistic
       wistfilled
          narratives

Premium Member Zendicant

The hillock, the bell
The swept terraces
The swept minds.

The white wood hall
The reflecting pools
The reflecting minds.

The weedless gardens
both in brain and curtilage.

The temple grounds.
The temple gives
    flight.

The temple sounds
bird/wind, hush/shuffle
The temple sounds
     right.

Some say all (I say many)
     paths
lead to these courtyards.

Follow flower flows.

Wending ways, find one's way.
The middle path, the Wu Wei Way...
Many, many ways to find One Way;
to find one's way, to finally find,
to unwend one's way to home mind, to
     No Mind.

Silences...
    Echoing off Oms.

Poverties...
     Bowls cradling alms.

Quietudes in multitudes,
     of balding bones. 

The chatterless babble of an unseen brook.
Torii, lotus, gravemarking gorinto, stupa, murti;
each here, each
     forsook.
Cherry, Plum, and Chrysanthemum;
each a Zafu seed, each a mustard seed.
Verdant lives, wants fallen
as Autumn leaves.  Needs.



And for the nun?  And for the monk?
Each path of pilgrim's footfall
an invitation, a lure for the mind
at least, if not the heart,
to
     depart.


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