Oversimplified Poems | Examples


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Simple as I Portray Complexity

Simply to put text that we cannot cover anything complex
There was a simplified version of every object-- an annex
The loss of everything to put it understandable; loosing context
Was like cutting all of the trees just to portray land like Lorax

Though, where we put things behind the bars is just the manifesto
Everything could be described out and reasoned with a memo
I was warned by Spinoza, that not everything fits out and can be a reductio
So, would a man be reasoning out of everything killing complexity would be a maestro

A virtuoso indeed, to be smart that it leaps every precautionary never stumbled
Wish I was that man to hide complexity, to assign simplicity-- oversimplified
But, I would lose the essence of dopamine in searching question categorized
As I would never understand if short text means something to unconcealed

Premium Member Greta

The world's biggest problem?  It wasn't going away. 
One fifteen year old girl would face it.  That was just her way.
She didn't give us fantasy.  She gave us action.
Demanding from leaders of the world, satisfaction. 

Politicians insulted her, saying, "naivete",
stating she oversimplified, that's how they'd portray
her.  Whether she was popular - that she did not care,
as she laid bare their smoke screens with clarity so rare.

She had things to deal with -  Asbergers and depression.
The brave way she handled them teaches us a lesson.
She turned depression into action. her courage to enlist,
making a few enemies, but none were scientists.  

Climate awareness was not this girl's only impact.
Backing the campaign to fly less changed the world in fact.
Sweden dropped four percent in domestic travel by air.
Pretty good work for a young girl with the grit to care.

Greta Thunberg, just a girl, also influenced me.
I keep my carbon footprint small, I don't go on a spree. 
I vote.  My money's in a fund with a low MSCI,
inspired by the young girl who won't let the planet die.

Premium Member 'to Be Or Not To Be: That Is the Question' By William Shakespeare

To be or not to be, that is the question, offers a proposition, whereto, the answer is oversimplified because one chooses to make the effort to be, opposes one who will make no effort whatsoever not to be, therefore, the outcome does justify the means based on reason, even a bum, must be able to survive, they need to apply themselves accordingly, basically, be the best bum that they can be to make it to another day because survival requires effort. "Or" is superfluous, in this case, as well as, "not to be".


2020 January 29


“To be or not to be: that is the question” By William Shakespeare


Premium Member Poemize the Math

They say one only can be wise,
                      If able to mathematize.
                      But what really underlies,
                      Is the failure to alphabetize.
Our numbers are arabicized,
A language to be more precise.
So is everything programmized,
Just language, oversimplified.
         So maths freaks, wouldn’t it be wise
         To speak in poems, homogenize,
         Don’t let us feel lobotomized
         Let’s feel the love, romanticize!

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April 14, 2017
Copyright © Darren White

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