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Premium MemberA Shift To Realism

Over the confines of the cliffs
in a cloud of crystalline haze
in the midst of a tsunami of whistling

skyline shadows in golden amber
hues ooze into the ocean
triumph against craving

waves of fairy spirits
Pearl stone sparkles in sundrops

flying is my passion
I'm diving again
in a wide chasm

sapphire knitting
chromium marble light

optimums prime
upheaval toward verisimilitude
you and my floating rhyme

with an increasing susurrus
a gentle melody is heard

tonal fuzziness
reverberations of rainbow hues
a scarlet choir of classic lullabies

Written: April 24, 2023

A Brian Strand Premiere No 1211 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Categories: optimums, analogy, appreciation, bereavement,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberGrains of Sand

Our time is finite on this earth-
   we never know, from time of birth,
the day that life ebbs at low tide-
   the hour we'll end our life-long ride.

Our days build up like grains of sand
   some lost to wind or slipped thru hand;
washed back to sea, or castles made-
   or long-ignored in the dark shade.

The waves of life roll on the shore-
   grains multiply; each wave brings more.
Our beach grows deep with every grain-
  the ones of joy, the ones of pain.

As grains may shift with every storm-
   more sturdy, deeper banks they form.
In those that rest as graceful mounds-
   life's sweet tranquility abounds.

Hope those who trod upon our space
   will feel the glory of God's grace
as our grains build, reshape, pursue
   to do the best that they can do.

 And when the final ebb tide comes,
   we'll tally up our optimums,
and pray the beach we leave behind
   can be the best we have designed.


May 22, 2019

Contest: Your Selection Again
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Categories: optimums, death, life,
Form: Couplet


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