A Shift To Realism

Over the confines of the cliffs in a cloud of crystalline haze in the midst of a tsunami of whistling skyline shadows in golden amber hues ooze into the ocean triumph against craving waves of fairy spirits Pearl stone sparkles in sundrops flying is my passion I'm diving again in a wide chasm sapphire knitting chromium marble light optimums prime upheaval toward verisimilitude you and my floating rhyme with an increasing susurrus a gentle melody is heard tonal fuzziness reverberations of rainbow hues a scarlet choir of classic lullabies
Written: April 24, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1211 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 4/27/2023 9:44:00 AM
Dear Lasaad, your vibrant and vivid imagery creates such a beautiful aura enshrined in the artistry of your verse. Nature had never been displayed more wonderfully upon the poetic page.. a poem of splendor and enchantment! Congratulations for your lovely win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/26/2023 6:20:00 AM
WoW! Lasaad, You have composed such a lovely nature write. I found it serene, inviting, and magical. Excellent job. Congratulations on your podium win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/25/2023 7:17:00 PM
You have created such a heavenly ambiance in wonderful diction. Words are your power. With them you create magic. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/25/2023 12:09:00 PM
Your words just sing, Lasaad! I love the way you use words to create poetic music! Congratulations on another win my friend! Just simply put - elegant and very real! Your words are gifts to ponder. Blessings and a hug!
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Date: 4/25/2023 9:02:00 AM
- The nature wonderful music ... beautiful, Las ... congratulations on your win in the Brian Strand contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/24/2023 4:56:00 PM
Splendid images in wonderful vocabulary, Lasaad. Best to you but you don't need it.
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