Obedient Poems

Being Obedient

Stay committed
Loyal, faithful and stay
Humble all the time.
Categories: obedient, character, faith, gospel, perspective,
Form: Senryu

My boyfriend is so obedient

My boyfriend is so obedient
I don’t have to worry about nothing 

He never liked a girls picture 
Never looked at what’s behind
Not even that kind
As if he’s not interested
But instead always with boys
Never with the girls
 
He never been to a club or party
Or looking in that type of way

Wow I’m impress I might say
Ding!
*Looks on phone*
Wait
HES GAY??
Categories: obedient, humor,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberStaying Positive And Obedient

Staying Positive And Obedient
Miracle Man
March 9th 2024

In negative surroundings,
remaining positive is hard. 
But I search for good,
and stay a stubborn die-hard.

I’ve never been good at keeping,
my true feelings hidden.
Sometimes things will happen,
that by me were unbidden.

Even news goes unreported,
unless it has a bad slant.
When God gives us a job,
many quickly say “I Can’t”.

Though we feel unprepared,
we should give it our best.
While God knows our heart’s,
our obedience He’ll test.
Categories: obedient, god, how i feel,
Form: Quatrain

Premium MemberObedience

I’m the most convenient of the lots you know
Willingly obedient, I suppose to show
Quick engagement into plots, that world has to offer
Trying not to disappoint, when its getting tougher
If you put me on the distance, I’m there to stay
If you want me to resist, needed words I say
If you want me to come down, here I’m for your pleasure
If you leave me on background, this is what I treasure 
I’m the one you want me to, it feels great to be
Consonant with every truth, that you have for me.
Categories: obedient, how i feel, love,
Form: Rhyme

Obedient People

People of the world,
Obey rules nation you go,
Blessings follow you.
Categories: obedient, blessing, gospel, people, wisdom,
Form: Haiku


Oppression

Dull shackles
An accessory to a crime
Worn out from repeated abuse
Of oppression for profit, for personal gain

The cracking of a whip
A contributor to paralysis
The inability to move
Petrified by the sight and sound
In chains, continuing to till the ground

After a thousand lashes
Many of us will have chosen
To become obedient
Begging and pleading
Or left to die bleeding

Next of kin
Release the pin
As I melt into the floor
Unconsciously aware of time

A common courtesy
Segregation for two kinds of people
Simply put, me and you
Separated by pigment, but bound by race
I ask for forgiveness for all of this hate
Categories: obedient, abuse, discrimination, hurt, people,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberThe Puppet Show

The puppet is telling a story in silence
But not its own story
It's only a story of others 
Or of the man behind the scene who narrates
Or of the writer who collects
Or of the anonymous who declares
The puppet is only an obedient actor
A silent storyteller of freedom and dignity
Man sometimes lives like a puppet too
Especially in a country where hegemony exists
Categories: obedient, freedom, life, men, silence,
Form: Free verse

Obedient Servant

What am I doing?
   Oh nothing much,
 A third in a house for two,
Living on a couch 
 In the Living room,
You know,
 Existing,
Feeding off the bottom,
  Living a life,
I never agreed too.
Categories: obedient, angst, anxiety, betrayal, hate,
Form: Free verse

Haiku's Temple 131

Assembly everyday,
that keeps my friend,
cool and clear now dear?.
Categories: obedient, adventure,
Form: Haiku

Premium MemberObedient American Ants

We are not grateful for God's food!
We complain and moan about taste,and price'
thinking we live in some free neighborhood.

We want rent-free houses and free Covid money!
Even if not ill, we think the government owes us 
a land of honey.

We all should wear beards and dress like 
Fidel Castro.If he were alive, he would be divinity....
our Maestro!(Cuban for teacher.)

Drive horrid cars, live on 300 a month.
No Capitalism allowed for we free-loading,
speed bumps!

I worry for the USA, all masked up, becoming such
obedient sheep! A government throwing statues, 
the Bill of Rights,and the Constitution into the deep.

To have ambition~then, somthing is terribly, wrong 
with you.
You will be locked away in the new No Freedom Zoo.

Obedient little, sweet ants are we!
Following all  laws to the letter.
While police are jailed when they try to make life better?

Break any law and you, my sweet, shall be on TV and 
a hero!
Follow all laws~ you will be billed as a nothing and a fat zero!


              April 12, 2021
                  ~4~
Categories: obedient, freedom,
Form: Couplet

Obedient

If I ask you for something
If I call you to help
If I long for you
If I want your love
If I need your feet soil
When I'll be alone
Will you company me?
Will you obey my call?
Categories: obedient, literature, lost love, love
Form: Free verse

Obedient Pillows

What demands to make
From their heads 
Obedient pillows?
Categories: obedient, body, caregiving,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberObedient Sheep

Donkey’s ogling artful masks
like drunks ogling addictive flasks – 
You sure look fancy—Nancy! 

Be submissive! Behaving neurotic
is now patriotic – loonies in charge 
of the asylum; 

           Be safe! Give them your first 
born...and second – they have an appetite 
for helpless babies, and religions that 
object – 

           teachers becoming malevolent
preachers, mouthing the party line – 

they look to godless heavens for the 
accepted sign your beloved offspring
are bullied into carrying – 

Keep your eyes to their worshiped
skies – stars of tyranny and leprosy….
Categories: obedient, abortion, patriotic, perspective, political,
Form: Free verse

Obedient Nation

O-bedient
N-ation
E-yes

H-eaven
U-sing
N-oble
D-evotion's
R-ighteous
E-xceptional
D-edication

F-or
I-t
V-alidates
E-lection

Topic: INC 105th Anniversary (July 27,2019) 
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
Categories: obedient, anniversary,
Form: Acrostic

Premium MemberObedient Opportunists

These are prostitutes or obedient opportunists.
Half of the world’s so called ‘scientists,’
who work for the military, part-time at least,
and many more for profits within industries,
that pollute, poison, and destroy the environment irreversibly.
These are not scientists. 
These are prostitutes or obedient opportunists.
Categories: obedient, science,
Form: Rhyme

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