Marbly Poems | Examples


Comic Girls

Comic Girls
      
Comic girls swing from poles fixated
Embedded in a jelly of red mist and light

Asphyxiated through cigarette smoke
In a dance choreographed through fog

Thick casts of body make-up from head to toe
Cosmetic are their lives up there

Masking age and lines through times advances
Night helps to cover all

They climb with marbled limbs
Up to the stars retired in their minds

Dim glow falls on them in pulses and vibration
Completing the illusion

And everything is fine inside the lines
As long as they continue on the climb
    
      That they could be extended, is what led them here 
      Here where men watch marbly limbed dancers go on
      Climb poles and dream on tubes and wires
      Miles of pretty wires and magic girls 

The beauty of their extensions
Is a marvel to observe
 
Charm and masked intentions in the club
Behold their every move towards love
 
Follow comic girls doing as they’re told
Transfixed on lonely poles until night club's closed

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