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Premium Member Amazement

A day, so many years ago, we traveled up to see the stars
from high upon a rising spire,
not knowing then, what we know now

We stood in voiceless, transfixed gaze, where once two towers pierced the sky 
But now the fog of stinging tears grips the throat and swallows years

How fragile life will bend and curve,
and take away in one brief day, the voice of reason, never heard

Now back again, and through the haze, we read the names, now carved like graves
Where water streams three thousand tears, and years can't wash away the pain
Where bitter comes the taste of rain

Yet, reverently, the voice is clear
of hope and pride, where life begins

Raw photographs have not been blurred, in spite of where my heart was plunged,
into the darkest dungeon known

And still the blackest smoke has turned
into amazement, where I've grown

to treasure good before it's gone...


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For Contest Sponsored By FJ Thomas "My Spirit"


Wildcat

Sweet dreams...
But don't try masking the seasons
in gold. 
You never needed to,
but thought so

because what we call love cuts us
like a crashing chandelier,
stinging all the more for how pretty 
it used to be... 
And to know

what it feels like 
watching years accumulate that itchy mold
is harder still. Because we never knew
what we were looking for,
even after we pick ourselves up 
from our dusty rooms
to walk the same lines.
At least we're braver than we know,

but doomed to fail 
if we play by rules we're urged to swallow-
A cosmic joke.

Now let me tell you how to win..
Choose the lion on the carousel, 
steal him away while you run out laughing.
Kiss your lovers,
hold your friends to their words.

Don't fear your reflection
when you've let those hands 
leave their mark,
and don't know why you're aching.
We're all a part of the circus,
start a new act.
Don't give in to the darkness
all for show-

Light a candle and roar.
Form: Rhyme

My Eyes

"My Eyes"



Green glass 
broken and polished 
washed in on a storm 

from a tempestuous Ocean
briny and
stinging

deep deep deep
as a journey 
has ever been

cool to the touch
transparency
contained 

within the smooth jagged 
worn by icy tides and 
buried in burning passages of jade

Reflection, 
their sea eyes

your seas 
green calamities
on straight lines

your words 
strung and 
slipped

around their sees 
through the eyes 
of a sharp needle

Sewing stories 
in the 
Short Slipstream

patchworks 
for a blanket of
Love

ocean forests
closing clams
gathering pearls up

watching 
through windows
other souls write

sage Delphi oracles
green shamrocks

(LadyLabyrinth/2019)

Premium Member Tell Them What You See

Tell Them What You See

Proverbs 25:11 KJV

There once lived a son who at the age of 30, telephoned his 58 year old father.
The son was distraught, dismayed, and depressed.  He was unhappy, unable, and unsure.

He said to his father, “Dad, this world is an awful place and so messed up”.  He was figuratively seeing dark clouds through dark glasses, and was surely disenchanted and disillusioned.

As he was describing to his father how he felt, and what he saw from where he sat, his father said to him, in a manner to offer a little hope, “That’s not what I’m seeing”.

In figurative terms, what was it that the father saw that the son could not see?  The father continued to give him comfort and advice.  After they were off the phone, these words came to the father:

“I see rain falling in season,                                                                                                      filling all available reservoirs.
I see snow capped mountains,                                                                                                  retaining snow in Winter,                                                                                                       to be released in Spring,                                                                                                       sending water to all”.

The father knew that he could not always rescue his son from bad decisions made,  nor even shield him from life’s stinging bees.  But he could always be there providing,  a “fitly spoken word”, just to tell him “what he sees”.

The father was then refreshed with the understanding,                                 that when a father has done all that he can do to help his sons                       and his daughters,  and there is little else or anything left that he can do,          he can always “tell them what he sees”.
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Form: Narrative

Premium Member Silk Wading

Silk wading thru wistfully warm sea waters,
my dreaming fingers have lingered to potter
with ocean surface, sun sparkled glitters.
My poetic pieces have gone full twitter
in charmed waters of crystal clear rarity
where I felt God's love soothe life's severity.

Slowly easing into ocean powered waves,
my playful moods have seriously caved
from forceful, salt stinging, brutal wave smacks.
My body has ached sea bruised, blue and black.
Rough seas crudely taught me joy may survive  
despite waves of fright that savagely arrive.

Now, reaching the end planks on my journey's pier
and viewing my twilight's approach so clear,
it's past sunshine glitters that most sustain
these concluding sea views for my earthly gain.
Yet, I know without crass waves that abused,
wading joys would not have peaked this enthused.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Spring Not All Sunshine

Springtime is more than just flowers and sun.
April is drenched, and bees will have much fun.
Swarming insects frighten with bites and harm. 
A staining sludge swamp and stinky silt farm. 

Sneeze and hay heat-stinging eyes are a curse. 
Lands that loom like orbs, yet deceits are worse.
Yet, we must not squander sight of quaintness 
with the rigors that spring brings or faintness.

Berth booms boost pollination burden rood.
Spring is spasmodic, apart from the mood.
White snow morphs into mushy rolling hills.
And sprinkle down verve up till the dale spills,

Flowers rising from snowfall restore hope.
Were we blithe beyond the zenith and slope?

3rd place contest winner

Written: February 05, 2023

Spring Is Not All Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Sonnet

The Wind In the Pines 2

("Noh" is an ancient Japanese style of 
drama, broadly similar to Elizabethan
tragedy.  "The Wind in the Pines" is
my version of a well-known Noh play.)


2.   The Beach, After Dark 

The coast has drowned in the gloomy night, 
but the moon shines. Two women in white 
come along the shore - Matsukaze, 
with her sister Murasame. 
They seem to float like smoke, in dresses 
with long, wide sleeves, their hair in tresses. 

MATSUKAZE 
The sad waves lap on our feet, 
then slide back. Like hope, they meet 
us running, then dissipate. Once spent, 
they slink off, ashamed, but can't prevent 
falling down to the cold sea. 
This is how it must always be. 

MURASAME 
When the tide relinquishes its assault on land 
and drains away, it is sure to strand 
small pools among the boulders, strewn 
along the beach. And, all too soon, 
the life in these tiny oceans, forlorn, 
will fade, like you and I, before the dawn. 

MATSUKAZE 
The moon can't cast any light through the pine. 
Our lovely sleeves, weighted down with brine, 
will tire us quickly. Crabs without shells, 
we are women who have no lover. Smell 
the sea fog, sister! Like a clammy dress, 
it clings to us, like our loneliness. 

MURASAME 
Salt in everything. In our hair, our skin. 
It sucks out our essence, leaves us thin 
and pale. Our only company, the moon ... 
and she will weaken and flounder, soon 
enough. She stirs the ocean, churning 
chill water, exciting in us a hopeless yearning. 

MATSUKAZE 
I hear the fishermen out on the sea, 
and I want there to be a man for me. 
They call, one to another. Out there. 
I smell smoke stinging the air, 
but no woodsman sees my boxwood comb. 
They cut fresh reeds, not for my home. 

MURASAME 
Look, sister! The moon's in my pail! 
And in yours, too. But there it sails, 
up in the sky, singular, not two. 
These little moons are like me and you, 
illusions that can never truly be, 
two facets of one destiny.
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Death's Destiny of Doom

Depriving me of the guidance I needed to grow up,                                                                                                                           father's departure was the closest that death came to me.                                                                                                 Ten years later, he came and took away my grandmother,                                                                                      the absolute dearest to my heart, but death never cared.                                                                                                   He was ruthless, terrorizing, never ceasing to wreck and ruin,                                                                                                   and although death ceased for a twenty-five year period,                                                                                               he came again, squizzing life out of my loving mother.                                                                                                O dark and mysterious one, you delight in the gloom.                                                                                                 O stinging monster, have you no pause, rest, or stillness?                                                                                                    O despiser of tranquility, your eternal doom shall surely come.

01152019PoSoupContest, 10 Lines, 10 Words, Free Verse, Lu Loo                                                                   Theme: Death

As I Walk This Graveyard Somber

As I walk this graveyard somber
Of a country shorn of life
Its gravestone reads, in the distance yonder
Stabbed by debt’s dagger knife

Our Founding Fathers, like demigods
Of a past enlightened age
Founded this nation, with musket rods   
And writings on a page

We the people, it was writ
Must perfect a union young
With stinging wit, this daring script
Was a rock at Britain slung

A golden republic, been thrown at our feet
They challenged us to keep 
From democracy’s thieves, from subtle deceit     
From apathy, and ignorant sleep

Have we kept our gold? No! It was packaged and sold!
By politicians - absentee dads!
How would our Fathers feel, if they could be told
That their children lost what they had?

Our Fathers would be, trifle a doubt
A hallowed kin troubled by din
Troubled by noise, the screams and the shouts
Of a country dying from within

With ethics abandoned, a sickness has crept
A plundering, gluttonous sin
These pitiful states, with mountains of debt
Belong in no handbook of hymn

Youth, why slave for a wage
To be took by taxation’s rake?
Why seek to be caught, in misery’s cage
For worthless currency’s sake?

Prepare instead, for the coming collapse
When Liberty staggers, stumbles and hurls
This nation, struck by a venomous asp
Expires, in agonied curls
© David Vr  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Respect For Integrity

A competitive path,
society v individual,
to retributive justice
is measured in accountability
of the individual
to respect 
the imposed police and court
and prison system.

More cooperative polypaths,
individual Me AND social We,
to restoring Ego/EcoJustice
are measured in collective integrity
reducing trauma
isolation
intimidation
and chronic stress triggers

Polymorphically designing
and polynomially balancing
and polytheistically engaging
healthy positive energy relationships
slow-growing resilient plants
with people
with one regenerative 
living 
restorative
resilient planet

Throughout co-operative
space AND time communion now
past AND future timeless 
health AND safety gifted presence
natural AND spiritual blessings
physical AND mental meta-integral
regenerations of

Cooperative polypaths
destined to restore Ego/EcoJustice
co-mediating secular/sacred 
trans-binary new age dawning
old school cisbinary fawning
creolizing 1/0 
bolt/nut
pole/hole
binomial integrity

Is definitely not
colonizing 
ostracizing
and punishing.

Resilient peace
is not achieved
through dissociative punishing sticks,
with no hope for fresh round carrots.

Traumatic isolating accountability events
do not have therapeutic outcomes
measured in Earth's emergent integrity,
wounds seeking impressive healing;
not more oppressive hurting

Because,
as any gang 
or tribe member 
or resilient community knows,
trauma of past victimization
does not predict
a future of multiculturally 
polyculturally inclusive
therapy

Because pathological governance
from predators above
and outside
is not resilient health
for those preyed upon
praying for natural
nurturing
nutritional compassion
below dispirited feelings
and inside tragic souls

Because patriarchal systemic trauma
power-over
is not ecofeminist therapeutic
power-with-and-within

Because stinging red pathology
is not soothing green health
or integrally learned
integrity woke 
polychromatic wealth.

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