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Premium Member Heartfelt Goodness

The old woman came out of the eye hospital,
After receiving the news, she was going blind.
She was feeling very depressed, not just about her eyes,
The state of the world in general.
After her hospital visit, she and her husband went to lunch,
They sat talking for a long time about times gone by and
how people seem to them to be less caring and sharing
today than in the war years of their youth.
After lunch, they went to a jeweller to have a necklace chain repaired,
the assistant was helpful and said that the necklace needed soldering
And direct them to a shop that could help them.
The shopkeeper remarked how thin the chain was,
He said he would do what he could, come back in an hour.
When they returned, the chain was nicely wrapped and soldered,
The shopkeeper handed the package to the woman,
Saying that he could not take any payment from her,
Because the chain would keep breaking and the pearl drop
On the chain was worthy of a better chain.
He was a jeweller who sold gold chains,
He did not once imply that the woman should purchase a better chain
from him.
He was an honest, sincere, thorough gentleman.
The woman felt uplifted by the goodness of the man.
And he knew the reason that she looked so radiantly happy,
And it had nothing to do with money.
Form: Narrative


Premium Member Me, Myself and I

Languishing in a limbo of roles
perpetually gleaning
reading ripe tombs and myths
a child, a child dreaming
parroting fancies in pretty pink
braiding wisps on a razor straps edge
the perfect daughter to become
when all that was wanted was a son…

life passed by for the adult child
caring for mother, sister, brother
never really finding a meaning of she
mothering mother
friend and companion to father
oh where was she?

excel… a touch tones sympathetic plight
graft the colors, the paint the light, the mold
the seemingly endless mission…life
languishing in a limbo of roles
captured waif, soldered wife
pie baker, clothes maker, gardener
twist the seam of an unknown dream
thirty years on hold
half a lifetime, square peg in a round hole
then she came, who was she you ask
why me, myself and I
bloom on a rose I saved me
stepped off the cross
and became.....me

Contest The Right Time
Poet: D. Guzzi

Soldered

Path walked measured with words,

Stripping the unwanted ones down, to be newly clothed.

Lost swooning over how much happiness the heart can take,

Felt those properly sieved emotions flowing through.

The words kept coming as the path was walked.

The farther the path was walked, the heavier the words were to strip off. 

Could either take it or take a hit.

Feeling both the warm and cold inside.

The hovering cost of being myself for too long. 

While it seems like it is a lot of work,

The control over the words I embrace makes it all better.

That I can choose the words I take a hit for.

Premium Member Gracious Grace

Gotta Love Alliteration 5-21-24
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Gracious Grace

Endless effervescence of grace,
In riots of radiance, infected by innocence,
Seeks out the heart harassed by humiliation –
Wrapped in sleepless shrouds of incensed worry –
When alliterations of angst plunder soiled spirits with pandemonium
Grace, the eternal romantic, lavishes love.

Purity, born of playful purity,
Tames tempests of melancholy mistrals
As midnight murmurs into dawn’s jubilant joy
As dusky dews flow from fountains of forgiveness
With eternal elixirs from the everlasting
For the pensive plea of the penitent pilgrim.

Grace sings the ageless anthem of sweetest sanctuary
In honeyed breaths for the hobbled heart to inhale
Ever abiding loveliness, always in ascent, 
Tingling with tenderness, opening soldered seas of sin,
Miracle made manifest in majestic melody
With promises penned in poems of peacefulness.

Premium Member We

We, the creatures, fused from stardust
soldered with the fires of hell,
crawling on our squalid bellies
from the froth of ocean's swell—

We, who wield supreme dominion
over land and sea and sky,
creatures with the wings of angels,
unaware that we can fly—

From the gutter in an alley
to the noblest castle wall,
every creature holds the secret,
though we have forgotten all.

Strains of music, soft, exquisite,
shimmer from the creature's hand,
drifting over cries of anguish,
centuries of lash and brand.

Stinking skins, the creatures' bodies,
base and mortal, house the beast.
Yet, within, the spark of heaven
kindles flames among the least.

Nature rules the creatures' habit,
spinning cosmos feeds the heart.
Which will navigate the journey
every creature's course must chart?

Time awaits the final verdict,
earth and oceans hold their breath
as the creatures swirl and stumble
toward the light or to their death.

We are grand, sublime, inspired,
hateful, foul, depraved and flawed—
still, the eyes of We the creatures
glimmer from the face of God.
Form: Rhyme


Labor Day 2022

Courtesy of one or more tradesmen, 
first Monday in September set aside
for employees able, eager, ready 
and willing to acquire money 
to marry groom or bride
climb the corporate ladder or 
become an artisan, entrepreneur, technician 
to side step getting rung, drafted 
like an oxen plow, commandeered and chide
by management as insubordinate 
till retirement or join kiln fields 
once the music died

from plane over exertion, yet nonetheless 
sweat of brow efforts praised I espied 
searching me noggin brief history re: 
aforesaid day, where barbecues fried
dispersed aromas recognizing efforts 
of workers with quality control as guide
grievances against danger challenged 
sense and sensibility stalwart did not hide
the shenanigans that took place inside
sense and sensibility 
without prejudice nor pride

boardrooms in tandem with glories of 
American made products from those
who put figurative nose to grindstone – 
just common everyday Jane's and Joe’s
who weathered extreme temperatures, 
whereby bodies froze
but thanks to those who battled elements 
at large and snatched doze

birth of brute efforts eventually 
earned reserved renowned
borne couple shy of 
nineteenth century, whence sound
of industrial silence replaced with 
parades where hoof beats did pound
burgeoning and bustling city streets 
echoed along hardened ground
fealty to country soldered 
with faith, federation union freedom 
and job security did thence abound,

which holiday underwent 
transformations as bustle
and hustle proved myth regarding 
land of milk and honey – 
from straining of muscle
whereby life, liberty and pursuit 
of happiness less of physical tussle 

set (thank you Masons and Dixons) 
cornerstone to an invisible 
complex edifice originally from New York
forgotten builders, farmers, machinists, 
et cetera who laid groundwork
wrought by destruction 
from Civil War largesse and pork
loosed from the bottle in 
Antebellum South, when off flew cork
freeing a genie, which became rendered
supremely courtly poet, i.e. this former dork.
Form: Rhyme

Labor Day 2021

Courtesy of one or more tradesmen, 
first Monday in September set aside
for employees able, eager, ready 
and willing to acquire money 
to marry groom or bride
climb the corporate ladder or 
become an artisan, entrepreneur, technician 
to side step getting rung, drafted 
like an oxen plow, commandeered and chide
by management as insubordinate 
till retirement or join kiln fields once died

from over exertion, yet nonetheless 
sweat of brow efforts praised I espied 
searching me noggin brief history re: 
aforesaid day, where barbecues fried
dispersed aromas recognizing efforts 
of workers with quality control as guide
grievances against danger challenged 
sense and sensibility stalwart did not hide
the shenanigans that took place inside

boardrooms in tandem with glories of 
American made products from those
who put figurative nose to grindstone – 
just common everyday Jane's and Joe’s
who weathered extreme temperatures, 
whereby bodies froze
but thanks to those who battled elements 
at large and snatched doze

birth of brute efforts eventually 
earned reserved renowned
borne couple shy of 
nineteenth century, whence sound
of industrial silence replaced with 
parades where hoof beats did pound
burgeoning and bustling city streets 
echoed along hardened ground
fealty to country soldered 
with faith, federation union freedom 
and job security did thence abound,

which holiday underwent 
transformations as bustle
and hustle proved myth regarding 
land of milk and honey – 
from straining of muscle
whereby life, liberty and pursuit 
of happiness less of physical tussle 

set (thank you Masons and Dixons) 
cornerstone to an invisible 
complex edifice originally from New York
forgotten builders, farmers, machinists, 
et cetera who laid groundwork
wrought by destruction 
from Civil War largesse and pork
loosed from the bottle in 
Antebellum South, when off flew cork
freeing a genie, which became rendered
supremely courtly poet, i.e. this former dork.
Form: Rhyme

Crash Override


Anaphylactic identity, constricting logic on the 
course towards infinity. Denial is drawn like a tarot 
reading, citing that it is all in your head. Hidden 
mysteries written in code - the key etched in our 
divinity. Searching for a God who shoulders all the 
blame while cartographing our lessons with fate 
Absolute power behind the circuitry, plugged into 
the all-seeing interface led by evasive clues to 
keep the system powered up and running smooth

Damage created by those on bended knees, 
pointing divisive fingers against our natural instincts
outside of the true spectrum. Wired up and held in 
the place of duty - holding on to the inverse of 
programmable time, like cogs in a wheel turning, 
without enough consciousness left in holding
to seek for records with even a misguided way out
Secret vaults protected by monsters in captivity

Borders and walls surrounded by tales of 
adventurous souls, looking upwards and onwards, 
over the ocean, and rocketing into the sky. All so 
the slave remains blind, swept up in fantasy of 
daring escapes - illusions hold them down to work 
harder, building an empire that has been falsified 
underhand - stolen in the name of dignity. Written 
on the tombs of despair to keep us longing for 
something else outside of the current of what is

Then came the virus that attacked the hallucinating 
code of deception. The binding network struck a 
nerve, activating the cleaners to destroy the peace 
that held like soldered resistors. The savior agents 
dropped from their blinded curses, and took up 
their swords like lightning rods. Connected by their 
inner potentials, they set out to remind every neighbor 
near that the codex has always been within

Premium Member Nature Speaks Best

Dark space
               Cold 
           &
inexorable
    soul
        adrift
            heart
               stopped
         plopped
    shocked
gawked

     I see you
  in 
 majestic 
&
forlorn
    debarred
       Not alive
            Not dead
                depressive 
                        state
                          bereft
                              of 
                              cocoon
                                 &  
                             callousness
                          drunk
                        on
                 cashmere
             kisses
          on
       brink
     of
wonder
      as
       flying
          soaring
              beyond
                    tipsy 
                       skyline
                           glimmering
                               where
                                    love
                               left me
                           breathless
                       soaked
                   inebriated
                with
            aroma
          of
    flowers
 snagged
in
 tangent
      thought

needle
   thread
        tales
            of 
               antique
                  mauve
                     lodge
                        in
                        every
                          stitch
                        and 
                     soldered 
                   spirit
               wanting 
              to 
         learn
 about 
    peace           &           love
a 
    touching
        scale 
           to 
           climb
              hanging
                 upside down 
                             from
                     clouds
                  in  
              a 
         starry 
      sky
1st place contest winner

Written: March 1st, 2023

Your Pick Again Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Other

Premium Member Wake Up My Heart

WAKE UP MY HEART

Wake up my heart, from satin sleep, so deep.
Up my expectations, of dawn’s satisfying affection.
My sorrows and worries pale, your loving kiss warms.
Heart burns and we’re soldered together, you and me.

Wake up my heart! Wake up!
Delicious in your crescent arms,
Your moving gears.  The blossom
of my mind, the garden of my Eden,
explosive in the mountaintop experience.

Deep affection warms me, I’m no longer cold.
You’ve warmed my skin, my emotions within.
Singular souls united, soldered tight, hearts reborn.
We view the splay of sunrise, with glistening pairs of eyes,
In one direction, forever as husband and wife.

10/18/2017
Julie Rodeheaver’s Wake Up My Heart Contest
1st Place


*two acrostics in verse one
Left side: Wake Up My Heart
Right Side: Deep Affection Warms Me
The two are used again, to begin
the following verses.
Form: Acrostic

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