Notes About The Poem

We

We, the creatures, fused from stardust
soldered with the fires of hell,
crawling on our squalid bellies
from the froth of ocean's swell—

We, who wield supreme dominion
over land and sea and sky,
creatures with the wings of angels,
unaware that we can fly—

From the gutter in an alley
to the noblest castle wall,
every creature holds the secret,
though we have forgotten all.

Strains of music, soft, exquisite,
shimmer from the creature's hand,
drifting over cries of anguish,
centuries of lash and brand.

Stinking skins, the creatures' bodies,
base and mortal, house the beast.
Yet, within, the spark of heaven
kindles flames among the least.

Nature rules the creatures' habit,
spinning cosmos feeds the heart.
Which will navigate the journey
every creature's course must chart?

Time awaits the final verdict,
earth and oceans hold their breath
as the creatures swirl and stumble
toward the light or to their death.

We are grand, sublime, inspired,
hateful, foul, depraved and flawed—
still, the eyes of We the creatures
glimmer from the face of God.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Howard Avatar
May 24, 2023 at 5:27 PM
From top to last verse how strong, bold, and true; and the last lines I am, and will be, mulling over...our eyes “glimmering” from the face of God. However, all eight stanzas are evocative, powerful, and fleshed out in our condition. Five Stars!
Gayagay Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Love this, especially the fifth stanza.
Hind Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:56 AM
WOW! What an amazing write!
Lillico  Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:47 PM
Clever poetic and concludes it all just right!
Faulkner Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Yes, we are complicated, with both light and darkness, hope and fear - I do like the lines 'creatures with the wings of angels/unaware that we can fly' - if we can reach more for the better angels of our nature, we can find so much goodness, this is simply awe inspiring~
Turner Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Very nice write, Katharine. Have a great weekend. We are all made in His image, that is the goodness in our hearts. However freewill was/is the downfall of man. (IMO) Never satisfied.
Rolland Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 1:40 AM
beautiful hommage to life, and mankind, exquisite pen yann
Seeker Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 11:21 PM
Wow! Love this! A sublime write, Katharine
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