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Dark space Cold & inexorable soul adrift heart stopped plopped shocked gawked I see you in majestic & forlorn debarred Not alive Not dead depressive state bereft of cocoon & callousness drunk on cashmere kisses on brink of wonder as flying soaring beyond tipsy skyline glimmering where love left me breathless soaked inebriated with aroma of flowers snagged in tangent thought needle thread tales of antique mauve lodge in every stitch and soldered spirit wanting to learn about peace & love a touching scale to climb hanging upside down from clouds in a starry sky 1st place contest winner Written: March 1st, 2023 Your Pick Again Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 3/3/2023 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Top notch. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2023 7:16:00 PM
This is very beautiful, Sotto:)
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Date: 3/1/2023 8:03:00 AM
- WoooW, Las ... beautifully written ... " left me breathless soaked infatuated with aroma of flowers" ... a feeling of nature's beauty ... - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/1/2023 7:43:00 AM
Your serpentine poem is interesting.
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