Kim Rodrigues Poet Acrostic

Wake Up My Heart

WAKE UP MY HEART

Wake up my heart, from satin sleep, so deep.
Up my expectations, of dawn’s satisfying affection.
My sorrows and worries pale, your loving kiss warms.
Heart burns and we’re soldered together, you and me.

Wake up my heart! Wake up!
Delicious in your crescent arms,
Your moving gears.  The blossom
of my mind, the garden of my Eden,
explosive in the mountaintop experience.

Deep affection warms me, I’m no longer cold.
You’ve warmed my skin, my emotions within.
Singular souls united, soldered tight, hearts reborn.
We view the splay of sunrise, with glistening pairs of eyes,
In one direction, forever as husband and wife.

10/18/2017
Julie Rodeheaver’s Wake Up My Heart Contest
1st Place


*two acrostics in verse one
Left side: Wake Up My Heart
Right Side: Deep Affection Warms Me
The two are used again, to begin
the following verses.

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Brian Davey October 22, 2017 at 2:15 PM Very well said and beautifully written, congratulations

MD Johnson October 22, 2017 at 9:55 AM Very lovely. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues October 22, 2017 at 11:44 AM Thanks MD!

Jan Allison October 21, 2017 at 7:01 PM Congrats on your win Kim, I am a little confused about the form being acrostic but i enjoyed the poem:-) hugs jan xx Kim Rodrigues October 21, 2017 at 7:44 PM The words “wake up my heart”on left side and on right side “deep affection warms me” In verse 1 then I used each to start the next two verses. Thanks, Jan!

Eve Roper October 21, 2017 at 6:32 PM Kim, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`* Kim Rodrigues October 21, 2017 at 7:45 PM Thanks, Eve!

Gary Smith October 21, 2017 at 1:03 PM Lovely poem Kim, congrats :) Kim Rodrigues October 21, 2017 at 7:45 PM Thanks, Gary!

Joanna Daniel October 21, 2017 at 8:52 AM Well done, Kim, and the double acrostic is clever and creative too:) Kim Rodrigues October 21, 2017 at 9:08 AM Thank you, Jo!

Sara Kendrick October 19, 2017 at 12:13 PM Regina I am going to use your title to write an Acrostic if that is okay with you..Let me know..Sara Kim Rodrigues October 19, 2017 at 4:59 PM ?

Sara Kendrick October 19, 2017 at 11:05 AM Very deeply emotive work..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Kim Rodrigues October 19, 2017 at 12:51 PM Thank you, Sara!

Mike Gentile October 18, 2017 at 9:14 AM I loved this one, Kim, so inventive. Good Luck in the contest, !!! Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2017 at 1:02 PM Thanks, Mike!

Silent One October 18, 2017 at 6:45 AM You did this very well, very creative and a well expressed poem about the heart.. Kim Rodrigues October 18, 2017 at 6:59 AM Thanks so much, Silent!