Wake Up My Heart

WAKE UP MY HEART Wake up my heart, from satin sleep, so deep. Up my expectations, of dawn’s satisfying affection. My sorrows and worries pale, your loving kiss warms. Heart burns and we’re soldered together, you and me. Wake up my heart! Wake up! Delicious in your crescent arms, Your moving gears. The blossom of my mind, the garden of my Eden, explosive in the mountaintop experience. Deep affection warms me, I’m no longer cold. You’ve warmed my skin, my emotions within. Singular souls united, soldered tight, hearts reborn. We view the splay of sunrise, with glistening pairs of eyes, In one direction, forever as husband and wife. 10/18/2017 Julie Rodeheaver’s Wake Up My Heart Contest 1st Place *two acrostics in verse one Left side: Wake Up My Heart Right Side: Deep Affection Warms Me The two are used again, to begin the following verses.

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Date: 10/22/2017 2:15:00 PM
Very well said and beautifully written, congratulations
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Date: 10/22/2017 9:55:00 AM
Very lovely. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2017 11:44:00 AM
Thanks MD!
Date: 10/21/2017 7:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win Kim, I am a little confused about the form being acrostic but i enjoyed the poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2017 7:44:00 PM
The words “wake up my heart”on left side and on right side “deep affection warms me” In verse 1 then I used each to start the next two verses. Thanks, Jan!
Date: 10/21/2017 6:32:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 10/21/2017 1:03:00 PM
Lovely poem Kim, congrats :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, Gary!
Date: 10/21/2017 8:52:00 AM
Well done, Kim, and the double acrostic is clever and creative too:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 10/19/2017 12:13:00 PM
Regina I am going to use your title to write an Acrostic if that is okay with you..Let me know..Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 4:59:00 PM
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Date: 10/19/2017 11:05:00 AM
Very deeply emotive work..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 10/18/2017 9:14:00 AM
I loved this one, Kim, so inventive. Good Luck in the contest, !!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2017 1:02:00 PM
Thanks, Mike!
Date: 10/18/2017 6:45:00 AM
You did this very well, very creative and a well expressed poem about the heart..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2017 6:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, Silent!
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