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Premium Member Well



"Well"



Well, 

I’m way too romantic
aren’t I?
Tattoo’d poetry 

on a tongue
not 
speaking

on a body of work 
spent unspent
love let loose 

on a deep
French Kiss
tatoo'd poetry 

on a tongue
locked in 
your everything

diving deep 6 
into you 
like Persephone

underground 

I’d rather be a carwreck 
driven 100 mph or more 
slammed up against your wall 

with purile certainty
fingers entwined
the plot curled, legs twisting

fingers deep
in ink
Well, bursting

I’m deep 
like deep Red bells tolling 
out there 

in that walk on water 
ocean of yours 
sharks circling

I ride 
their sandpaper backs
holding tight onto their quartz fins 

their razor sharp teeth 
cutting up all my pages 
in the in-between 

emerged in everything 
the losses over
every winning win

the black and white
Orcas circling grin
wolves like words 

come to save me 
and I am yours
eventually, heaven ridden 

Well, 
I’m deep 
6 ft in 

another

4 and 20 
blackbirds 
risen



Candide Diderot. ‘24


Premium Member Change of Fortune

The clown juggled his feelings in front of an incredulous crowd

Life is a circus and even a fool’s manna does not fall from heaven

He had balls to impose his mask and mascara onto instant applause

Was not sure though about who was the jester of standing ovations


His delusion was the illusion of reality in preposterous meaning

An existential artist he seemed to be in retro postmodern nostalgia

Intermezzo personified with endless beginnings entombed in a grin

Cut with a razor tattooed on his skin facing an ignorant audience


True to his script he stumbled and fell short and flat of intemperate desire 

Gobbled up sand mixed with elephant poo and regurgitated misplaced pride

‘I sold my soul to fake laughter but even the kids are stuck on their phones’

Past his best like a relic he assembled dust of anger and fear for the future


He had turned into a proverbial slurve a slipped metaphor of fading delight

An imposter of joyful exuberance in a tedious world that could not care less

A projection of resentment a nuisance and overdue reminder of innocence lost

He was real to himself though like a hole in a bucket draining trickles of faith


As he gathered oblivious agony and immeasurable shame and contempt

He whipped one last sphere of hope high into the canopy of sad gloom

Hoped that the contorted trapeze artist might catch his final effort to escape

She twisted dangled reached out then crushed into a net suspended in yearning 


With the show over ungrateful spectators left the miserable dishonest display 

The tent was locked up and the onlookers retreated into self-righteous boredom

As lions horses fleas impalement and con artists took to their cages’ containment 

The clown and the acrobat slipped off the road and eloped into a promising night



17th June 2019

Suisideffect

Leaving feels like losing you and leaving feels like lonely,
The closest thing to calm I have are nights when you're there to hold me.
Contact feels like grounding, your embrace feels like Safety. 
God knows I haven't felt enough of that lately. 
Leaving feels like cords severed. 
Heart string and a hollow pit in my stomach, 
The ache to be near you and wish that I wasn't. 
So f'd up, so f'ing insane. 
Every time you leave it leave imprints on my brain. 
Co-dependent personality. 
Thats my diagnosis, 
Do you know what that means?
It means when I'm alone I feel hopeless. 
I can't help that the pressure drops me to my knees. 
I can't stop the intrusive thoughts that make it hard to breathe. 
I'm sorry that my first solution is always su!c!de. 
Because this is not a world I ever wanted to reside. 
I take the meds that are supposed to fix this chemical imbalance, 
Every memory I have is a trauma response and I'm aware its f'ing tragic. 
I never learned how to cope with the truth, 
Or how everytime I offer my body I feel used. 
I am held together by this blanket of scars. 
Begging someone to see them for what they are. 
My ribs. My thighs. My wrist. My eyes.
Do you know how hard it is to lie?
I'm not alright. 
I'll promise you forever but I want to leave today. 
I want to leave right now. 
I dont want to feel this way. 
Because the closest thing to peace I had was with a razor to my wrist. 
Enough alcohol to drown the screaming past my chapped lips.
I dont mean to dwell but  did that feel nice,
It was probably the pills cause I dont know what else went down that night. 
I just know that it felt warm and I felt safe knowing I'd never wake up. 
Never feel that heart ache of being told to "get back up" 
I know being su!c!dal is not helping my case.
But your honor, if I'm honest. 
I f'ing hate this place. 
I repeat cycles and hurt everyone who's close.
I push the only people who care about me away, This is not a life I would have chose. 
I get it. 
I promise that I do. 
But when I tell you that its me. 
Please don't ever think its you.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Unopposed Oxymoron

Unopposed Oxymoron

This poem is light as a heavy contradicting complement
and rhymes with no correspondence of sound sharp at
the cutting horizon’s edge of melting confusing fission

Serious like a foolish jester and in trivial necessity it wants 
to be chimed in disagreement discordant harmony figure
of speech silent shapeless tallies and out into central periphery

Traditional post-modern as an anchor less mooring unbound
a planar linear Oxo cube for poetry soups soaps speechless
rhetoric it says nothing’s everything all for refutation and proof

Cut as a half witted razor blade dull as laser bred dull diamond
the oxymoron in proximal distance joins divisions idiotic
intelligence bland precision in amorphous diffused clarity

I am nothing but and everything as I know to know nothing
where healthy insanity and clear normal madness when 
condensed reflection and prismatic diffusion meets parting

My initial final backfiring telos in idle lazy effort’s endeavour in 
rhyme and in lightness dissonant un-melodic featherless burden
is that being at different places in different times in the same
space and same moment is not an oxymoron but debatable truth

Written on 27th August in Johannesburg dateless timeless 
and nowhere with a blank mind and mindful disregard
Form: Rhyme

You Are Indispensable: Attila Ilhan Translation

Ben Sana Mecburum: “You are indispensable”
by Attila Ilhan
translation by Nurgul Yayman and Michael R. Burch

You are indispensable; how can you not know
that you’re like nails riveting my brain?
I see your eyes as ever-expanding dimensions.
You are indispensable; how can you not know
that I burn within, at the thought of you?

Trees prepare themselves for autumn;
can this city be our lost Istanbul?
Now clouds disintegrate in the darkness
as the street lights flicker
and the streets reek with rain.
You are indispensable, and yet you are absent ...

Love sometimes seems akin to terror:
a man tires suddenly at nightfall,
of living enslaved to the razor at his neck.
Sometimes he wrings his hands,
expunging other lives from his existence.
Sometimes whichever door he knocks
echoes back only heartache.

A screechy phonograph is playing in Fatih ...
a song about some Friday long ago.
I stop to listen from a vacant corner,
longing to bring you an untouched sky,
but time disintegrates in my hands.
Whatever I do, wherever I go,
you are indispensable, and yet you are absent ...

Are you the blue child of June?
Ah, no one knows you—no one knows!
Your deserted eyes are like distant freighters ...
perhaps you are boarding in Yesilköy?
Are you drenched there, shivering with the rain
that leaves you blind, beset, broken,
with wind-disheveled hair?

Whenever I think of life
seated at the wolves’ table,
shameless, yet without soiling our hands ...
Yes, whenever I think of life,
I begin with your name, defying the silence,
and your secret tides surge within me
making this voyage inevitable.
You are indispensable; how can you not know?

Attila Ilhan (1925-2005) was a Turkish poet, translator, novelist, screenwriter, editor, journalist, essayist and reviewer. Keywords/Tags: Turkey, Turkish, Translation, City, International, Leaving, Depression, Absent, Absence, Parting, Separation, Distance, Loss, Break Up, Soulmate, Soulmates, Love, Lovers, Companionship, Passion, Desire, Longing


Premium Member Me, My Cell Phone, and I

I smoke the grass and mow the laundry,
Fold the dishes and vacuum the mail,
Then smile while I’m taking a selfie,
Texting proof of my own Holy Grail.
And I wait in the dark for a friendly reply,
It's just me, my cellphone, and I.

It's got an app for this, an app for that, 
And the blessings of Amazon Prime.
Plus all that streaming podcast chit chat,
That's consuming my ration of time,
While I search for a site that might brighten the sky,
Meant for me, my cellphone, and I.

It’s got a post hypnotic ringtone  
That determines the mood of my day.
It seduces in razor blade silence,
Then presides while the game is in play.
Just don't ever dare to ask the question, "Why?"
It's just me, my cellphone, and I.
Form: Lyric

Holes Within the Holes

Holes Within The Holes
(nautical in nature)

A hole in the dark
The ship sank apparently
Unseen or something paused
Passed briefly through a lightning strike
Perhaps there was no ocean
Or hole in the ocean worth noting

Being it was dark 
No witnesses, no survivors
No evidence between the flashes
So what is there between the light

Was there a floating box of dynamite
A cannon sitting intransigent at sea 
Where a sun drenched sky was not

Above, so clear the missing sky arrives
Hangs out wireless above the awkward
Over water, a soup made of smoke is fog
Less tangible to the touch when landing soft 

Drowning becomes a mystery 
A blanket of saltwater, sprinkled with people
Alive or not about a floating box perhaps
Was this just a juxtaposition to the mist
What can be said about a ship
Drifting in and out of memory 

Underlying the surface stands a sandless beach
Holding the ocean with a shore line incomplete 
In contemplation, in contempt of land and masses
Cast out, stretched on a string to pull it all together
 
Perhaps an evaporated puddle formed at first
Or invisibility came to call before the birth of oceans
Between the space that serves serenity or both
A hole within a hole within a circle
In the dark where circles form
Where mushrooms have no names or rooms to call their own
Because there are no places left to grow amazement on

Worlds with no corners rotate through space
They form smooth edges with opinions razor sharp
Sink in the middle of the oceans agitation
If only they were strong enough to lift the fog 
Into boxes safe and sound much larger than themselves

Sandless beaches make good company 
For ships lost below the surface shallows
Wondering how they got there in the first place
Holes inside the holes inside the circles
Sunk to the bottom fall about
Deep in thought about tomorrow's questions 
Of holes inside the circles hollowed out

Darkness

There's a phantom
Following me home
I’m overwhelmed with fear
I’m always alone

This place is so dreary
I feel stuck here
Like I’m forced
To live here with no escape

I want to run
But my legs won’t move
It’s like my feet
Are glued down

He would poke fun
At me
But he didn’t know
His words were like razor blades

Slowly tearing me apart
Every day there
Was killing me
Now I have a bitter heart

I feel like this darkness 
Is swallowing me whole
I feel like it’s goal
Is to kill me

This darkness is turning
Me into something I dread
An insensitive loner
I feel like I’ll end up dead

There is no end
To this pain
It just gets worse
I could never face my fears

I have no friend
To rely on
I am stuck
Crying bloody tears
© Sad Boi  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Etchings With Euphoria

Euphoria


E~ Enchanting ecstasy at each glowing    
      thought of you.


U ~ Unreserved understanding that I do
      not write the script for the planet.


P ~ Plato's philosophy is divine, to 
      question all things mercilessly.


H ~ His Hellenic eyes, sparkling from
       Olympus, calling me.


O ~ Openly obeying in dignity,God's 
       Omnipresence.


R~  Reveling rhythmically, allowing me
       to dance to my own poetic beat.


I ~  Increased Integrity founded on
       honest  individuality at all        
       costs;razor sharp honesty


A ~ Amethyst Angels, may they bring     
       inner peace to all of humanity.





                 June 25, 2020
                     10am PST


                Poem # 1,311
Form: Acrostic

She took my Man

To the other woman,
I am not mad at you.
What you see in him now,
is what he shows me yesteryear,
only one of us will weep upon his grave:
To the All-Woman Who ‘Loses’ Her Mate
When love unravels, and betrayal stings, The all-woman weeps, her heart’s fragile wings. Yet hidden within this tempest of pain, A metamorphosis awaits, a higher gain.
For grief and loss, like chisels, refined, Her mating intelligence, a gift divine. She learns to read the subtle cues that lie, In future mates, revealing truth from the sly.
And so, she emerges, battle-scarred but wise, No longer blinded by love’s sweet disguise. Her heart, a compass, guides her through the storm, detecting low mate value, keeping her warm.
But what of the other woman, entwined? She dances with deception, love’s twisted bind. Her prize, a man who once betrayed with ease, A history of infidelity, a heart ill at ease.
As days pass, the all-woman stands tall, her dress discarded, memories small. She knows her worth, her happiness her own, No charity case, no borrowed throne.
And when malice whispers, its venomous hiss, she invokes Hanlon’s razor, dismissing the abyss: “Never attribute to malice,” she wisely imparts, “That which is adequately explained by stupidity’s arts.”
Human behavior, shaped by traits unseen, A dance of folly, wisdom, and what might have been. To the other woman, no anger, no strife, Just a silent knowing—one weeps upon life’s knife.

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