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Voices In My Head

Did I tell you, I hear voices in my head,
“Kill, kill,” I think that’s what they said.
Spoke to my therapist but then she disappeared,
Police questioned me, which I found weird.

She’d been stabbed sixty times outside her front door,
They called me in again and questioned me some more.
That morning I woke covered in blood
I buried the evidence near the marsh, in the mud

I sat at home, the voices loud in my head,
As the news report said now one hundred women dead.
The voices etching the same word like a razor sharp quill,
In my brain, “Kill, kill, kill, kill, kill.”

I need fresh air, on this lovely, hot summer’s night
But I find I’m standing behind the couch, watching you in plain site
Turn around, look, you’ll see me with a knife
Watch closely while I slowly take away your life…

See you soon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 23, 2011 at 9:30 PM
lol... kind of like a jason movie.. but, not...lol.... enjoyed reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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April 21, 2011 at 11:33 PM
Criminal Minds is one of my favorite shows, Sid. There are people who hear voices that tell them to lash out at others. You've just given us a scary look into the minds of serial killers. Very intense and quite frightening. Power-packed dark poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Cooper Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 8:06 PM
alright now it's time for bed, and I am looking under it before I go to sleep. lol great write!
Chachere Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 7:46 PM
sounds pretty frightening.."I" must be a dangerous woman? but sometimes is better to just forget everything and fly away... to do what you please.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
Onclaud Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 8:16 PM
eerie, grotesque, beautifu, witty! you and your fascinating mind , sid! of for a contest, all my winning wishes! :)
Hendricks Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Awwww, you vicious person, you. lol A highly entertaining poem, my friend. This I would brand real poetry.
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