Long Pivoted Poems

Long Pivoted Poems. Below are the most popular long Pivoted by PoetrySoup Members. You can search for long Pivoted poems by poem length and keyword.


Premium Member A Story You'll Surely Adore


      ~ A Story You'll Surely Adore ~ 
              ('Suicide's a Pain')

     As I was about to enter the store
       I was smacked by a malfunctioning door
     Without so much as the slightest warning 
       or a perfunctory good morning 
     
     Astonished more than stunned
        I took off at a brisk run
     to inform the manager-on-duty
        of the door that had greeted me so rudely… 

     When I’d finished my story, to my utter surprise
        the manager muttered: “Lies, lies, nothing but lies”
      My jaw dropped and I exclaimed, “Why? Why? Why?”
        the manager replied, “We’ve an epidemic of spies”

     “Spies from our competitors,” he continued
         “that’s why we smacked you upside your head”
       In disbelief and rage, I said, “Well, I never” –
         pivoted right back into that door ~
                                      and keeled over dead
Form: Couplet


Rising Again

I trusted the circle I called my own,
But shadows revealed where betrayal had grown.
A love I believed in turned into a thief,
A million was stolen, my name dragged in grief.

They thought they had buried the fire in me,
But pain is a teacher, and pain sets you free.
From ashes of loss, I’ve chosen my way,
To rise even stronger with each passing day.

I pivoted paths, let the old chapter close,
From fintech’s hard lessons to new seeds I chose.
Occupational safety, with purpose I stand,
Training, rebuilding, with strength in my hand.

For setbacks are whispers, not endings, but calls,
To rise from the ruins, to dance through the falls.
I am not discouraged, my spirit won’t bend,
Each loss is a lesson, not the story’s end.

The Middle

You got distance, relief, and healthy distraction.
I was held by responsibility, restraining reaction.
For you, novelties, travels far and wide.
For me, holding down the fort became a thorn in my side.

We both bought into this future plan of ours,
Retirement security, all worth a couple of scars.
I soon came to learn, oh, the lesson cut deep,
The flashbacks still find me, break me open, make me weep.

I thought I could fix you, guide you, help you understand,
Shield your pain, comfort you, wasn’t that part of the plan?
Was I mistaken? I’m confused, where did I fall through?
By understanding your wounds, was I obligated to bleed for you?

The imbalance made me dizzy, so much I couldn’t stand,
The quiet cost of holding us together in one hand.
We adapted. We pivoted when the world pushed full force,
Learned how to ride the wave until it ran its course.

Silence and bending, born from a place of love,
No inner brakes, no discipline, when the "coulds" replaced "shoulds".
The impact of your actions landed differently for us both,
I’m still living with the weight of what it broke.

Your logical explanations walked calmly away,
While I stood emotionally stranded, unsure how to stay.
Whatever comes, let it meet me whole,
Not as the keeper of another soul.

I’m done confusing strength with staying still,
I now choose a life,  that meets my will.

Idioms

When the world was youthful
spiderwebs sang as they were spun.
Language was woven in the air
as accents of winds and trees
conveyed by an eloquent sky.
Untrammeled meadows annunciated
upon the lips of dens and burrows
scooped by shrew, mole, and vole. 
Fresh bathed daisies signed a speech
as they swayed, 
buttercups birthed calligraphy’s of sunlight.
Giddy rills gave voice to fritillaries
that flew to the sun or moon.
Words were idioms painted upon
the melodious leafage 
of the up-risen and rising.
Then that shaggy brat
the primordial ape it grunted forth,
translating its gripey gut
through the clack of a creaky tongue.
Guttural and gregarious
it learned to babble and 
belch an oral discordance.
It yapped and yawped,
yawped and yapped
until a spoken language
verbosely pivoted to prolix
polluting the very airy air.
Then it was
that a nascent poet boldly stood
rhyming would with could
until even the dumbest of his tribe
understood
and cheered him fit to bust
while the green grown world
with all its idiomatic kin
lost the will to express
as before
for the fluent earth again.

Premium Member Tribute To Maradona

Tribute to Maradona                                                                      

                                           TO SKY HIGH
                      Small structure in five feet five frame
                            flashed in fabulous fame.
                                  
                     Little Argentinian Golden Boy
                     Bullish, buoyant, graceful with eyes angelic,
                    Rustic, over confident, playing magic.
                     Appeared an exceptional footballer
                     Nonparallel on strut and swagger 
                        with tangled disarranged hair.
                           Careful yet without care.
                         mesmerizing spectators.
   
               Promising skill on challenge of arrogance.
                Strong sturdy solid sense of balance
                  pivoted on self-belief.
                           His real relief
                 to sky ball high playing on loops of eyes
                 with magic of swift feet showing miracle.
                   Public was marveled on blink less glance.
               Excitement, emotions to enhance, not perchance.

                Sometimes tagged by adverse label
               as Sport’s misguided rebel
               or misdirected: Full of flaws,
              violating norms and laws.

            Fair-fine or foul play,
            Right or wrong! Useless to say.
           Legitimate or illicit! No way.
               Maradona, World Celebrity
              charmed populace with same intensity.

                     Extremely impatient cocky,
                       Yet He was the STOCKY
                             NUMBER TEN
                          reaching heaven.  
     
           Beyond football ground crossing cheekiness
            Maradona proved his splendid sunniness.
          Amazing talented player touching excellence.
            Left too early the high heroic spirit.
             An athletic genius touching summit.



    12/01/20

                                                        First Place
   'Obituary Maradona' Contest by Mohan Chutani


Poetry in Motion

Contest by Matt Caliri


Premium Member as we metamorphose

between the crown and Bindu zones
the true highest point on our head
a blob of bliss consciousness hones
the touch of God by Whom we’re led

chin chakra holds steady resolve
it is God’s will that here too acts
boundaries blur as we evolve
dance that kundalini enacts

at the centre our heart expands
it is the sacred meeting place
melting pot of energy bands
where time dissolves and all is grace

spine is a seamless band of steel
it too is pivoted to heart
palms and feet too express their zeal
to align fulfilling their part

between eyebrows up till the crown
the nadi becomes our third eye
in bliss mists we willingly drown
resurrected after we die
Form: Quatrain

As Often As Anyone Else

How often do shadows cry
And if they do
This means like us
they feel to 
How often do whereabouts 
dispose of their founders
The emptied hands pivoted gruesome
To only expire before you lose them
This is why my eyes cry
Late night movies 
Midnight hours, how do you spend them
When letters feel “ no need to reply”
To where do we send them
A curious mind in eye sight
A figure taunted
The difference in people is 
“Don’t let your personality dye”
Flesh wounds appear the same
Determination’s found in change
Could you spare me some change
A course of new events
Hand prints on the face of cement
Try not to take life out of context 
“I’ll be home soon”
Read his final text
History is somewhat of a vex
Sort of a temporary fix
A day, a age, that some of us miss 
How do you become a person 
Or exhibit the features of everyday  people
Minus the wars, the battles, the ether 
Trouble awaits 
For those of us who refute 
Similar choices brought
About in this place of being
Bloggers are subsequent to ignorance
Just the lack of reading 
Express’s the true meaning of being for real
The objective to live and protect yourself 
Minus the kill
Sometimes glory comes as a steal 
Did you think love was beautiful
Black coffee, cigarette buds 
A raspy voice 
from a figurine with seductive cuticles 
A slice of pie
Banana’s and caramel 
On top of our lie
Apart of me is fiction
And some of you is true 
A journal 
Do you commit yourself to unfulfilled comments
Did you dust your hands off 
Wash your face 
and forget to accept the necessary compliments
If I’m shady
then you weren’t around 
Too far gone, dancing in the sun
Musically
you love the violin
Sympathetically 
you can’t sing without the gin

Premium Member Back to the future

Went searching for good enough and discovered it can only come from within myself
So I went back to the future in a DeLorean to try to pinpoint when things began to veer off track so I could alter time to put them back

It took a few trips after realizing I couldn’t quickly flip the script
Started by slowly chipping away to release the image I was trying to portray
Then pivoted to rewiring my circuits to help wrangle my inner circus
The process pivoted me from my head to my heart which granted me a fresh start

But it was only after I made the choice that I was able to hear a new inner voice
It started as a whisper but turned into a roar that I could no longer ignore
To wash over me to say what had been so tough, that I can relax and rest easy now since I am good enough

Premium Member Dancing Bird - With Video Link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wtpPcmLKRFU   Dancing Bird


Yesterday, I saw a shadow dart across my keyboard.
When I turned to look outside the window, 
I spied upon a sparrow playing in the sun.
He was dancing in dramatic fashion 
Across the shrubbery that was his home.
I could tell it was a male by his markings.
He was busy with his boasting, and proud.
No longer a fledge, he fluffed his feathers
To parade his prowess to all that might adore him. 
Then, he pivoted into a pirouette, and pranced
Most skillfully across the length of a branch
And launched himself into flight.  

Today, the sounds of birds cackling and chirping
Inside the shrubbery drew me to the window.
I could see three sparrows engaging in some fun and frolic.  
Perhaps it was some flirtatious mating ceremony. 
While most sparrows do look alike,
I’m sure that one of them was the dancing bird
I’d seen the day before.  I watched briefly and smiled,
Remembering my own courtship and rivals
Who would fancy my choice as their own.
I returned to the monitor and before I could begin 
My work, there was a loud thud upon the glass.
I gazed outside and there upon the ground was a small hawk
Clutching the dancer in his talons. 

Tomorrow, this bird will not dance.
He will not sing or court another.
And as sparrows are many,
I will no doubt find another to enjoy from this vantage.
I chide myself for failing to warn him of the danger.
I was too busy with my own enjoyment to notice.
Now, I close my eyes and reconstruct those moments
As I attempt to resurrect the dancing bird,
And preserve him....forever.

Premium Member A Brief Shaggy Dog Story that actually Ends

   A shaggy dog espied a graceful cat
     She arched her back, he fell flat
   on his jowls, she pivoted - nose up
     His paws akimbo, Shaggy arfed
         Wait, dear cat, I can explain that  

   But Graceful didn't miss a stride
     After all, she had her pride
   Who needs a mangy mutt who falls
     she thought, a dame like me must be bought

   Now Shaggy may be clumsy, but he's not deaf
     He heard Graceful mewing under her breath
   She loves me sure, Shaggy felt
     His tender heart, her icy exterior would melt

   So Shaggy scrambled after her, closing in fast
     When he drew close, she turned around at last
   It was then that he saw Graceful's face up close
     "Adios," he cried
                       ~ Her whiskers were caespitose
Form: Narrative

Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace