Long Neuropathy Poems

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Premium Member Fingers

I now type with only a finger
For neuropathy makes me lame
Muscle spasms in hands linger
My hands seem to ignore my brain

It’s as if I never was a typist
Who flew 65 words a minute
Now I’m limited my gripe is
Takes me longer to finish

You’d think I’d complain I’m not vain
My other deficiencies are worse
But who wants an artist who can’t paint
Or a poet too hurt to word verse

I know my lupus has no cure
My asthma is no fun to me
But give me fingers fast and pure
To delight in the writing with ease

When I try to play piano
Fudge fingers suck the air
Notes yell like silver Soprano 
A melody ruined by despair 

I have mixed feeling about it
We all have a cross to bare right
But with fingers like mine I doubt it
Could complain and moan all night

Dear poetess had hip surgery
And has persevered despite all
So I say what the nerve of me
To complain of finger pain small talk
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Thank god for Neuroboxing support

Suffering with a traumatic 
brain injury nerve damage 
traumatic headaches neuropathy 
spalastity degenerative brain injury 
it's a blessing to have medical care 
out reach support groups balancing 
pain my entire body filled with 
crippling nerve pain sensitive to 
light touch finding support groups 
I find swimming helps in between 
nerve blocks injections and botox 
injections to give me some relief 
keeping me comfortable during 
severe traumatic pain it's a blessing 
to have the neuroboxing team 
on board amazing help for retired 
boxers anyone Suffering with 
head trauma like Mohammed 
Ali Alex Ramos many other boxers 
athletes my uncle Bob Satterfield 
would be so pleased if he was alive this 
legacy inspired me to continue 
to fight through unsettling crippling 
pain for my traumatic brain injury 
traumatic headaches awareness 
saves lives i know I would literally die 
without my medication and treatment 

God bless the USA
Form: Naat

Premium Member Silent Pain, Screaming

Leaving my car, I hasten my pace as
silent pain, screaming inside me
intensifies with the increasing movements made
by what I only can describe as an invisible snake
slithering beneath my flesh.
It’s felt by only me, and seen by no one -
the strange phenomenon
of a nervous system gone awry from side effects
of the “miracle” of modern medicine.
I know my conditions now by the title of Neuropathy,
but that definition does not come close to
describing what I experience unceasingly.
Mere “tingling or numbness” 
would be preferable  
to the feeling of a slithering serpent
squeezing or pressing down along my back.

Striding into the grocery store,
I find what I need as quickly as I can.
At any time, my metaphorical serpent
might decide to wildly strike, 
perhaps while in the checkout line as I wait
with my silent screaming -
Please, line, move! Just let me finish here!
Afterward, with grocery bags in hand,
I scramble to my car.
Once inside, I press my back against my seat.
Ahhhh, relief!
The snake loses its momentum when I am reclined
or pressing myself against a surface,
and so I am not physically as active as I used to be.

People with chronic unseen disabilities
are not just a few.
When you chance to see someone fidgeting
in a line, looking as if
they’d like to “jump out of their skin,”
maybe you are seeing someone like me
with silent pain, screaming
from within.

Nov. 19, 2022
For Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 33 Poetry Contest
#3 chosen: Silent Pain, Screaming

Premium Member My Vast Fortune

Tasty home-cooked meals
  A heater that works every time
Shoes that ease my neuropathy
  My collection of Mercury dimes 

Glasses that calibrate my vision
  Grown sons who consider my advice
A computer that responds to my touch
  A car I don't have to drive so much 

Faucets that don't run out of water
  A closet of clothes that fit just right
Tulips and daffodils bloom in my garden
  Graceful birds perform pirouettes in flight

A quiet residential street in front of me
  More children playing than cars passing by
Leaves bursting out on tree after tree
  The sun yawning, traverses a pastel sky

Friends sound anxious to get 'out there'
  They've an itch to wander and roam
As for me, I marvel at my vast fortune
  The comforts and blessings of home
Form: Verse

The Joy I'M Without

I walked with Colby,
  he never walked with me

His spirit to guide us,
  his love in the lead

We circled the globe
  a time and a half

His tail was my compass
  to guide us steadfast

In all kinds of weather
  we stuck to the trail

Under sunshine and rain
  our forays prevailed

In May of last year
  he collapsed on our walk

And with valor he tried
  but his body would balk

Its been downhill since then
  with him not knowing why

The knowing inside me
  his neuropathy slide

I knew it was coming
  as he struggled to stay

And he fought till the end
  on this very sad day

As I looked in his eyes
  for the last final time

Willing to give up my life
  for his health to revive

The fates were against us
  his clock had run out

The pain in his parting
  —the joy I’m without

(Villanova Pennsylvania: November 9th, 2018)
 ‘Today, I lost The Best Friend I Ever Had’
Form: Rhyme


Circumstantial Covenant

When a book is presented
As being conflicted in ways
TRUTH can arise only when
Time has fulfilled her days

Choice is paramount in LOVE
Possibilities endless in scope
Circumstantial evidence presented
In so many ways that leave, without hope

...of tomorrow

Within that book, is a very fine line
Whereby one must follow the sliver
One can discover, fear lies at the threshold
Of the door who has promised to deliver

The ground doesn't change in earthquakes
The sky doesn't fall in seasons of sorrow
Neuropathy tries to seize movement 
But blood can always be found within the marrow 

...bringing life

No covenant of convenient conditions
Was made with humanity's fall
A sacrifice of pure LOVE was given
ONCE. and............for ALL

Written by Trudy Schrader on 10/29/2022
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Dandelions and Elderberries

A diesel generator
    drowns out the rusted Marshall stack

Six years we owned
    the Billboard charts;
        the DJ who crowned us
            every summer
                for five straight years—
this week, a county fair;
tonight, the Music Pier.

The drummer tapes two split fingers
    closes his hand once
        hard—
then rests the sticks
    by Mick’s ashes
        in a Folgers Black Silk can behind the kit

Tommy’s gold sequins
    snag on his dialysis catheter
        as he sits

Johnnie the P-bassist drags a stool onstage
    to ease his neuropathy

We are crushed elderberries
    hawking CDs from a card table,
bleeding a dark, tart stain
    onto ninety aluminum chairs

No teenagers weep;
    a man wipes funnel-cake grease
        from his chin

As I tune the cherry-red '57 Stratocaster
    down a minor third,
hoarse from pushing air
    through a throat scraped thick
        with scar tissue

We were a dense, golden field
    beneath the studio lights
        on Midnight Special

Now plucked dandelion crowns
    scatter over Ferris wheel blacktop,
leaving white ghost-tufts
    snagged in the Music Pier’s
        boardwalk planks

Where just three bald stems
    plug into the seaside damp—

and the seeds drift past the shoreline,
    washed up,
        vanishing into the deep
            we used to call home

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