Notes About The Poem

"Elderberries and dandelions:
an old story of what ripens, what scatters
and what fades to grey and disappears. 
The spirit of those artists who understood
that music is never just sound,
it’s a life, a history, and a haunting."

- Poet

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Dandelions and Elderberries

A diesel generator
    drowns out the rusted Marshall stack

Six years we owned
    the Billboard charts;
        the DJ who crowned us
            every summer
                for five straight years—
this week, a county fair;
tonight, the Music Pier.

The drummer tapes two split fingers
    closes his hand once
        hard—
then rests the sticks
    by Mick’s ashes
        in a Folgers Black Silk can behind the kit

Tommy’s gold sequins
    snag on his dialysis catheter
        as he sits

Johnnie the P-bassist drags a stool onstage
    to ease his neuropathy

We are crushed elderberries
    hawking CDs from a card table,
bleeding a dark, tart stain
    onto ninety aluminum chairs

No teenagers weep;
    a man wipes funnel-cake grease
        from his chin

As I tune the cherry-red '57 Stratocaster
    down a minor third,
hoarse from pushing air
    through a throat scraped thick
        with scar tissue

We were a dense, golden field
    beneath the studio lights
        on Midnight Special

Now plucked dandelion crowns
    scatter over Ferris wheel blacktop,
leaving white ghost-tufts
    snagged in the Music Pier’s
        boardwalk planks

Where just three bald stems
    plug into the seaside damp—

and the seeds drift past the shoreline,
    washed up,
        vanishing into the deep
            we used to call home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Freie Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 7:40 PM
You just strummed the chord that numbed my funny bone, Bro. Alas, tho in the shadow of such seeds of thought, I bask in this glow of soulful symphonies.
George Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 9:59 PM
I know music is an inherent passion with you that never diminishes with age. Those musicians who rocked the stage once have become dried dandelions now. Still their innate love for music made them forget all their physical infirmities and have come together for staging another show. Their deterioration in physical health hasn't doused their enthusiasm for music. I see one with his dialysis catheter, another suffering from neuropathy and you struggling to push air through a throat scraped with scar tissue. Yet music flows as it is never just sound, it's a life, a history and haunting. Daniel you are just amazing. A double FAV.
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 6:56 AM
- With the old guys on stage... rock and roll dreams... the good old memories, Daniel :) - hugs
Onclaud Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 6:18 AM
i'm a sucker for music but never heard of this band...the nice thing is through your lively images and detailed snippets of a setting, i was there with you, riding along the strips of this delightful experience ...play on, daniel!
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:54 AM
Dear Nette, Your love of music shines through every comment you leave, and I’m grateful you stepped into this one with me. Even if the band is unfamiliar, you caught the atmosphere, the wear and tear, the strange beauty of playing on after the years have had their say. Thank you for riding along with the images. Blessings, Daniel
Hind Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:27 PM
this is unfortunate, even raw by the way you were writing, so sad... beautiful of you to write and remember
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:54 AM
Dear Paige, You felt the rawness in this piece, and that means a lot. There’s a sadness in remembering what once was, but also a tenderness in honoring it. Thank you for reading with such sensitivity and for seeing the heart behind the memory. Blessings, Daniel
Bayles Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 6:47 AM
Such a great tale of rock stars living in past glory when they grow old. Every detail is wonderful.
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:55 AM
Hello Mike, I appreciate your words. You understood the arc perfectly — the long slide from bright stages to quieter corners, and the way every detail carries a bit of truth. Thank you for taking the journey with me. Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 12:13 AM
Dear Daniel, I must admit I dont know any of the names youv highlighted in a very poetic manner, but for some reason after reading this i would like to youtube and listen to these musicians. Millennial songs and music is very different, and I have this same emotional connection to Millennial bands, and they still live on. I know you are an amazing singer and guitarist! Would love for you to sing and play and upload again! I do appreciate your voice! This is once again a very unique subject youv touched! And how youv written is just very poetic and different! I love the way you write on so many things and also how your lines emanate emotions! This is a fave!
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:55 AM
ear Empress, Your enthusiasm is always a light. Even without knowing the names, you felt the emotional weight and the history behind them. Millennial music has its own heartbeat, and I love that you connected your memories to mine. Thank you for your kindness about my singing, maybe one day I’ll upload again. Your support means more than you know. Blessings, Daniel
Hamilton Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 7:39 AM
Daniel another great poem from your magical pen I love the flow of it and it brings back many memories of my younger days hugs Shadow
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:56 AM
Dear Shadow, Thank you for this warm note. I’m glad the flow brought back memories, music has a way of stitching our younger days to the present. Your encouragement is always appreciated. Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 10:39 AM
Daniel, I love the title! My son-in-law was a drummer in a band. My daughter met him when they were playing at Midtown Music Festival. Now he plays at church and she sings (didn’t see that coming). Love your poem…faving…I have been listening to Sirius radio, many old hits…you almost remember the feeling you had. So much to say, Daniel, you’re a conversation starter! Hugs
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:57 AM
Dear Kim, I love that your family carries music in its bones, a drummer, a singer, and a story that keeps unfolding. Sirius radio does bring back those old feelings, doesn’t it? I’m grateful the title and the poem spoke to you. Thank you for the fave and for sharing a bit of your world. Blessings, Daniel
Parker Avatar
July 10, 2026 at 6:13 AM
only those of a certain age will grasp the musical journey you expressed, your poem breathed reality...a fav
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:57 AM
Hello Frederic, You’re right, some journeys can only be fully felt by those who lived through the era. I’m glad the poem breathed reality for you. Thank you for the fave and for reading with such understanding. Blessings, Daniel
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 10:57 PM
Another gem from your gifted pen Daniel, music is a great part of our lives and it never grows old only the musicians. Look at the Rolling Stones, I hope I have their energy when I get older. Tom
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:58 AM
Hello Tom, I appreciate your words. Music stays young even when the musicians don’t, and you’re right, the Rolling Stones are proof that spirit can outlast the years. Thank you for the kind encouragement. Blessings, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 4:30 PM
Excellent and poignant use of metaphors and nostalgia. Are you portraying an actual band here. It appears maybe so, but I always listened more to pop rock than the Woodstock type music. You know how to write, poet.
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:59 AM
Dear Andrea, Thank you for your thoughtful read. Yes, the poem draws from real musicians and real moments, though shaped through metaphor and memory. Pop rock or Woodstock, every era has its own emotional signature. I’m grateful for your generous words. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 10:05 AM
Love this shorter write/story with a wonderful quote/picture. You are so right when you say, "music is never just sound, it’s a life, a history, and a haunting." So Very True... Enjoy your day writing away..............
Rodgers Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 6:59 AM
Dear Paula, I’m glad the shorter form worked for you. Music really is a life and a history, something we carry long after the last note fades. Thank you for your kindness and for always cheering the writing on. Blessings, Daniel
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