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Health supplement rages nowadays
It's said to improve health
And so maybe for a better health
And so maybe for a longer life span
And so maybe for a more relaxed life
A pharmacist may introduce
A variety of health supplement
But we feel suspicious
Because we're spiritually unsafe
Maybe we need a religion
Maybe we need some leisure
Maybe we need some friends
Maybe we need our family
Maybe we need love and affection
Maybe we need a dream
Health supplement alone
Won't accomplish what we need
Spiritually
Unless we fall sick
Health supplement alone
Won't accomplish what we need
Spiritually
Maybe the bible
A supplement from heaven
Will do
Original Sin is not the only kind of sin
There is another kind called Actual Sin
Which we ourselves commit
Actual Sin is any willfull thought
Desire
Word
Action
Or omission
Forbidden by the law of Eternal God
There are 2 kinds of Actual Sin
Mortal Sin
And Venial Sin
Mortal Sin is a grievous offense against the law of Eternal God
It is a grievous offense because it takes away the life of the soul
A serious or mortal sin drives our Divine Lord out of life of the one who commits it
Little boys and girls are not usually in danger of committing Mortal Sins
And if they commit venial sin on purpose when they are small
And do not try to avoid them
They will commit big sins when they grow up
To make a sin mortal these 3 things are necessary
1st the thought
Desire
Word
Action
Or Omission must be seriously wrong
Or considered seriously wrong
2nd the sinner must know it is seriously wrong
3rd the sinner must fully consent to it
Venial Sin is less serious offense against the law of Eternal God
Some Venial sins are deliberate
This means they are committed through fear
Or without thinking
If we are sorry afterwards
And do our best to improve
Our Divine Lord is pleased
A sin can be Venial in 2 ways slightly wrong
1st when the evil done is not seriously wrong
2nd When the evil done is seriously wrong
But the sinner sincerely believes it is only slightly wrong
Or does not give full consent to it
A labyrinthine of emotions sears through my being as I study my proud pastiche in new perspective, a new eye.
An angry eye, a stirred up eye, a nit-picking not-really-me-in-any-way eye.
I unenthusiastically toss some purple and green glitter onto the dragon’s tail that is disappearing around the bottom left hand corner of my creation.
Satisfied? Actually, I rather liked it better before.
Prior knowledge tells me if I start scraping, I will be sorry.
In January when I completed this glorious masterpiece, I was soul-satisfied.
Considered it one of my favorite pieces and I have hundreds.
Done recklessly, with overwhelming confidence.
My eyes scan my art studio, landing on things hither and yon, considering
What I could use to improve this now crude unfinished piece.
What will please another’s eye?
What are they looking for?
More red? Would purple splotches Pollock style do?
What is going to make it sagely sound again?
I glare at the pastiche I used to adore,
The one I was proud of for months and months.
One of my favorite pieces.
Despising myself for
Doubting myself
Because of one
Lone critique of
Someone I have
Never met.
One little review. Bah!
I scrape off the glitter,
her oboe is so-so
but her chello is grand
she sings the lead
and plays drums in the band
her man friend
is a flutier who flutes is
first-chair
they applaud and listen
appreciation they share
the song lacks incentives
we must improve production
these applauses interrupt
the next song's introduction
maybe if we fuse the
orchestra and band
these audiences will
act more like fans
piano, piano player and song
the arrangements are right
but lyrics are wrong
they sound right but they are song to this tune
they ask the woman to meet
him for their hunny-moon
she is a stranger a
a curse word at best
she asks for most
but settles for less
she is described as a do-that-to-her
course you better not say that to her
she'll curse you
and fight you
and cause
trouble for you
she has a man but he mean less to her
course she wishes to
be with someone else
it might be better if she was by herself
but anyway just sing the song
who care if it's right
or if it's wrong!
A bsurd and foolish it might be
B ut it’s my nature, you’ll agree;
C annot ignore what I go through
D espite the help I get from you.
E ach time a stranger comes in sight
F ragile emotions turn to fright
G et me excited at one glance
H opelessly standing in a trance.
I ndeed I tremble, break in sweat
J ittery feelings that I get
K nocking together both my knees
L ord, I go thinking, save me please!
M aybe the problem can be solved
N eeding a pro to get involved
O ut of the groove I have to move
P erhaps in time I will improve.
Q uestions and answers are at hand
R eally I want to understand
S ome of the things that haunt my mind
T he doubts that I have to unwind.
U nless I act before it’s late
V enom of thought will seal my fate.
W ish that the phobia will now end
X eno reverting to a friend.
Y earning to welcome all mankind
Z ealous to foster peace of mind.
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This poetic form is called “Abecedarian”.
This is an Acrostic where all the consecutive
letters of the alphabet are used.
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30th Aug 2014
Contest: Abecedarian
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Placing: 1st
I grew up on a farm
that was often boring, despite its charm.
As a form of detox
I loved to go on walks,
ignoring my mom's talks
for I knew she was scared, I'd come to harm.
It's scary by yourself,
I felt I might meet the Devil himself.
But, that never stopped me
I wanted to roam free
where no one else would be
and in winter, I'd sneak out by myself.
On my way home, I'd go
past a cemetery shrouded in snow.
Rumored to hold a curse
some say, involves a hearse
and locals fear the worse
for strange sounds get heard when winter winds blow.
Once, I felt unsteady
and couldn't pass; I just wasn't ready.
There's nothing I could prove
but I was scared to move,
and things didn't improve
though I should've been back home already.
And then I saw mom's light,
never has there been a more welcome sight.
Though her eyes were glaring
and her tongue unsparing,
her scolding showed caring
and her heart whispered everything's alright.
(Rhyme)
1/7/2018
Pasteur Quadrant
_______________________
Two Akhal Tekes in front of
a space age inspired Carriage
" The Trophy and the Crown"
They might hack the software in my new
"Standard" carriage by Lavish Honey
The new brand Horse Carriage
which is incredibly modern.
It's insulated light a sturdy for
it's size
and has software that controls
the instruments on board
it has a battery that is rejuvenated
by the alternator type devices on each wheel.
it has a portable toilet and wash station.
An onboard radio and phone.
A two way radio and a Air-conditioner
and heater.
And Televisions and cameras with monitoring systems
aboard the space age vessel.
The windows tint in sunlight
and frost over in the dark.
It has headlights
but it's recommended for daytime use.
Lights inside makes it a place
where camping out is possible
due to the exterior stove and sink.
A microwave and small refrigerator
inside makes snacking possible.
both solar powered by the the attachment on
the roof.
It's incredibly modern and
it is "Easy on the Horses as it is lightweight
and sturdy from the usage of aluminum.
Far Superior than other made before it.
The brand is recognized as Best over all.
Yet it is increasingly vulnerable to remote
exploits and medling: by those who wish
to hack the systems.
An anti-hacking device needs
to be invented to monitors all hacking attempts.
To improve the safety to both man and beast.
The Chassis is named Black Rhino!
the horsemen has a partially covered booth
a waiting area to sit when he is idle.
It comes standard with only radio, cameras, heating and cooling systems.
And the Lavish model which doesn't stop at equipment.
There's always room for
Thoughtfulness, empathy and care.
Don't take relationships for granted;
Separations can occur.
As we've seen, this can be sudden
Can impact deeply on our life.
Never forget each day how much
You love your parents, children, husband, wife...
Keep your faith alive and strong
Or else one day you won't believe.
Keep your goals in focus,
Never doubt you can achieve.
Remember to say, " Thank you! "
To the ones who touch your heart.
Contribute to unity.
Don't let society split apart.
Keep in mind the many blessings
That our Father does bestow.
Cherish precious memories,
Don't be quick to let them go.
All of this we can succeed
If each and every day
We do all we can to improve ourselves
And live a better way.
Don't let depression conquer you.
Yes. YOU have the strength to win!
Let your true colours shine,
Your heart burn bright...
Let a better year begin!
In my late 20s having got wed
but in the following year a broken heart
my love passed away to heaven above
a difficult first few months at the start
But someone gave me really great advice
don't feel alone get involved for good
as had a stammer all of my life
start a stammering adult group if I could
In this forget my own troubles
so together with therapists did unite
encourage others along so to speak
so all in unison join to fight
Really felt being able to help others
who had the same struggles just like me
added to my confidence a real boost
in this self-help call, we all did agree
So although my speech didn't improve much
we contributed together with all be there
although that group no longer does exist
for a few short years our cares we did share
(This is written about what advice offered in my life has been the most beneficial.)
The year has been full of sat backs and cheers.
This last year has taught me, we have one life to live,
And good memories are important to make.
Setting goals are beneficial to me, but with no fears.
First, to improve my creative writing skills and learning new things
That come from the heart and what I see.
Let my pen flow across the page like a bird building it's nest.
A personal growth, in habits, behavior, actions, and how I react.
A willingness to make changes in my life.
To start having relationships with family & friends.
Be willing to go and explore beyond my boundaries.
To stay health & become physically fit.
12/7/2022
Resolutions For 2023 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon