Long Admonition Poems

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Premium Member Fig Leaf

Lessons on fig leaves make me reflective
Learning them from biblical perspective
Serving as meaningful life’s directive
Taught by God Who’s sovereignly assertive.

Fig leaves’ clothing, though nature-propped fashion
Adam and Eve sewed to hide transgression*
Covering their disobedient action
Earned them the Lord’s grievous admonition.

Fig leaves show hypocrisy-disclosure
Admitted as human nature’s pressure…
While yielding to sin-denial leisure
Conscience seeks justification-pleasure.

Fig leaves**, sans fruits in Christ’s time were worthless
On withered tree, considered as useless 
Deserving rebuke for trust that’s faithless
Needing revival from being hopeless.

With such fig leaves’ Scripture-brightened insights 
My soul asks Almighty for pardon plight
Confessing iniquities midst guilt-blight
Thankful for grace to start anew --- aright.

*Genesis 3:7 And the eyes of them both were opened, and they knew that they were naked; and they sewed fig leaves together, and made themselves aprons.
**Matthew 21:19 And when he (Jesus Christ) saw a fig tree in the way, he came to it, and found nothing thereon, but leaves only, and said unto it, Let no fruit grow on thee henceforward for ever. And presently the fig tree withered away.

Dramatic Monologue in Rhyme form

April 10, 2020
3rd place, "This or That, Vol 11: Fig Leaf Theme" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 4/22/2022.


Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Battle Fighter

March 20 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on 1Samuel 25-28

Key Verse –1Samuel 25:28 … The LORD will certainly make my lord a sure house; because my lord fighteth the battles of the LORD, and evil hath not been found in thee all thy days.

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY BATTLE FIGHTER
				
Lord God, You are my battle Fighter with Your goodness, always constant
Thank You for building up my prayer life as I stay repentant
Let me hearken to Your voice, never hesitant
So that I can arise from being submission-resistant.

Lord God, You are my battle Fighter with Your comfort, always great
Thank You for beautifying my soul along paths of virtues, righteously straight
Let me abide in Your prosperity’s peace-state
So that I can find favour in Your loving trait.

Lord God, You are my battle Fighter with Your victory, always precious
Thank You for brightening my days with Your deeds so gracious
Let me pitch round about Your plan, not feeling anxious
So that I can smite carnality attacks that are fatally vicious.

Lord God, You are my battle Fighter with Your cheer, always encouraging
Thank You for blessing my faith to be worthy of divine pursuit’s plunging
Let me accept Your admonition for my character-upsurging
So that I can prevail by Your sanctification’s purging.

Lord God, You are my battle Fighter with Your heart, always kind
Thank You for bringing my best to Your grace-perfection in mind
Let me dwell in Your will where Your favour I can find
So that I can labour as the servant You’ve faithfully assigned.

Lord God, You are my battle Fighter with Your warfare, always powerful
Thank You for blowing my failures with Your peace, constantly blissful
Let me ascend toward Your wisdom’s perception, prudently helpful
So that I can combat distress that makes me fearful.

Lord God, You are my battle Fighter with Your might, always formidable
Thank You for burying my losses with Your strength so steadfastly capable
Let me obey Your Word since You make it understandable
So that I can serve You well, being spiritually stable.

March 20, 2023
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Affirmation of Adoration To the Almighty

Almighty God* I adore
Author of faith, approved by Your atonement
Accept my acknowledgment and admiration of Your anointing.

Awed by and adorned with Your advice
Abiding am I in Your avouching assurance 
Apprehended against abominations, arrayed with holiness’ attire.

Away from adversary’s affliction
Alertly, I advance toward Your accommodating arms 
Allowed to ascend to approach You, appeased with Your admonition.

Abhorring accusers’ affinities
Attentively, I avoid their artillery
Abstaining to adapt abusive attitudes, actually awful.
 
Awakened from arrogance 
Apprehended along my adversities’ anguish
Available am I to advertise heavenly affairs for hell-acquittal’s advantage. 

Attended to by Your amazing abundance
Appointed am I as ambassador of adoption with access to Your altar
Always assisted amiably to accomplish assignment around Alleluia-adventure.

*Revelation 1:8 I am Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the ending, saith the Lord, which is, and which was, and which is to come, the Almighty.”

January 23, 2019
2nd place, "Alliteration - Old or New" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May; judged on 9/2/2022.

Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Correction Standard

July 31 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Jeremiah 43-47

Key Verse – Jeremiah 46:28 Fear thou not, O Jacob my servant, saith the LORD: for I am with thee; for I will make a full end of all the nations whither I have driven thee: but I will not make a full end of thee, but correct thee in measure; yet will I not leave thee wholly unpunished.

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY CORRECTION STANDARD			

Lord God, You are my correction Standard 
midst snares of iniquity around transgression-captivity
Thank You for keeping me within Your pardon of wondrous serenity
Along Your driving sovereign authority
For my enjoyment in Your promised eternal security.

Lord God, You are my correction Standard 
midst evil wickedness
Thank You for leading me to walk upon Your statutes’ truthfulness
Along Your sanctifying holiness
For my righteousness against worldliness’ destructiveness.

Lord God, You are my correction Standard 
midst corruption’s consumption and filthiness' abomination
Thank You for disciplining me of my disobedience with Your compassion
Along Your exhorting admonition
For my victory by Your purification to involve in Your great commission.

Lord God, You are my correction Standard 
midst threats against vow-performance
Thank You for nourishing me with Your sustenance
Along Your watchful guidance
For my warning from being a failure due to vain arrogance.

Lord God, You are my correction Standard 
midst woe and sorrow-caused sighing
Thank You for shielding me so in Your perfect will, I’ll keep on staying
Along Your caring comfort and concern in my moments of crying
For my courage to face challenges, grievously trying.

Lord God, You are my correction Standard 
midst desolation’s wastage of rejection voltage
Thank You for saving me from hell-fire damage and eternal hostage
Along Your ready provision against calamity’s shortage
For my peace while savouring Your granted everlasting heritage.

Lord God, You are my correction Standard 
midst fear’s torture as well as deceit's culture
Thank You for purifying me with Your forgiveness-nurture
Along Your perfect Word of sin-smiting gesture
For my triumph in soaring toward faith-venture.

July 31, 2023
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Spreading Happiness

Spreading happiness is the need of the hour;
Practising it requires so much of willpower.
Redressing others’ problems is always fine;
Empowering the weak at all times is a good sign.
Accepting people as they are should be your design;
Developing empathy for the poor is very divine.
Igniting an iota of inspiration is what people need;
Nurturing of these qualities makes one great in deed;
Guaranteed is the infinite joy, like this if you proceed.

Help the sick giving no scope to any inhibition;
Accept all, not troubling them with any admonition.	 			
Pass on your knowledge to the untaught;                      			
Pray for their welfare without any ill thought.    			
Impart values to the people for their better living;
Note that nothing is as great as forgiving.
Express your gratitude to the people who help you; 	
Surprise them with a compliment the way you knew;
Smile more, the whole world smiles with you.

	
Spreading Happiness Poetry Contest
Acrostic poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon 
Date: 28-03-2023

Placed: 3rd
Form: Acrostic


Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Peace Endower

October 22 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Acts 18-19

Key Verse – Acts 18:9-10 Then spake the Lord to Paul in the night by a vision, Be not afraid, but speak, and hold not thy peace: For I am with thee, and no man shall set on thee to hurt thee…

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY PEACE ENDOWER			
	
Lord God, You are my peace Endower along Your assured compassion
Thank You for Your pressing direction upon holiness persuasion
Toward my cleansing and sanctification
Now, I worship You with triumphant jubilation.

Lord God, You are my peace Endower along Your peaceful contentment
Thank You for Your convincing Word’s fulfillment
Toward my Scriptural illumination and enlightenment
Now, I trust You midst fruitful ministerial engagement.

Lord God, You are my peace Endower along Your perfect will
Thank You for Your sacrificial work at Calvary’s hill
Toward my salvation and redemption through Your ransoming bill
Now, I learn from You so that Your plan I can fulfill.

Lord God, You are my peace Endower along Your instructive discipleship
Thank You for Your Holy Ghost’s indwelling for effective stewardship
Toward my zeal and diligence, submitting to Your workmanship
Now, I labour with You in our partnership.

Lord God, You are my peace Endower along Your lovingkindness
Thank You for Your prevailing mercy of great goodness
Toward my obedience and compliance to Your commandment-fullness
Now, I follow You with complete willingness.

Lord God, You are my peace Endower along Your purposeful design
Thank You for Your victory of glorious sign
Toward my favour and fervor in doing that which You did assign
Now, I rest in You, enjoy Your molding, never to resign.

Lord God, You are my peace Endower along Your protective defense
Thank You for Your encouraging prevalence
Toward my motivation and admonition so intense
Now, I delight in You in Your fellowship’s iridescence.

October 22, 2023
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO CONSIDERS OUR MORTALITY

May 31 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Job 4-6

Key Verse – Job 4:17 Shall mortal man be more just than God? shall a man be more pure than his maker?

PRAISE BE TO GOD WHO CONSIDERS OUR MORTALITY	

Praise be to God Who considers our mortality as He:
Saves souls with His grant of eternal life
Sanctifies sins toward empowered liberality
Satisfies spirituality amidst His everlasting love
Satisfies stewardship through His enabling lessons
Strengthens servanthood along His enduring leadership

Job 5:8 Praise be to the Lord for listening to 
us as to Him we commit our cause for His:
Admonition against any wishful affection
Approval according to His Word’s authority
Assurance anchoring my ways along willing adherence  
Attention always awakening me toward worshipful awareness
Affirmation alerting me to appreciate His works, worthily awesome

Job 6:8 Praise be to the Saviour for 
granting our requests for:
Victory over transgressions
Valor against villains and traitors
Virtues against vexing temptations
Values verily vanquishing vanity’s torture 
Vibrancy in our ventures that voice out to Him our vow’s trust. Amen!

May 31, 2024

Premium Member FAITH IN GOD WHO WANTS US TO SERVE HIM WHOLEHEARTEDLY

October 5 Faith in God Bible Meditations Based on Matthew 6-10

Key Verse – Matthew 6:24 No man can serve two masters: for either he will hate the one, and love the other; or else he will hold to the one, and despise the other. Ye cannot serve God and mammon.

FAITH IN GOD WHO WANTS US TO SERVE HIM WHOLEHEARTEDLY
	
God wants us to serve Him wholeheartedly against evil temptations
By His ministering care for our stewardship functions… 
Great is He in fulfilling His promise to help us in our afflictions
As we follow Him with faith along His instructions.

God wants us to serve Him wholeheartedly against unbiblical setting
By His meaningful teaching about ministry that is so exciting… 
Great is He in showing us blessedness acts worth presenting
As we rejoice in Him with faith despite trial and testing.

God wants us to serve Him wholeheartedly against carnal plight
By His illumining light for our obedience-delight… 
Great is He in making us shine by His gracious sight
As we seek Him with faith to do what is right.

God wants us to serve Him wholeheartedly against proud sentiment
By His inviting altar where we bring our offerings of sincere commitment… 
Great is He in delivering us from discontentment and discouragement
As we abide in Him with faith toward heavenly achievement.

God wants us to serve Him wholeheartedly against spiritual adultery
By His holy call to win over idolatry that causes misery… 
Great is He in compelling us to serve us midst attacking worry
As we trust Him with faith in our Christian victory for His glory.

God wants us to serve Him wholeheartedly against vain reward
By His constant admonition that serves as great safeguard… 
Great is He in correcting for us to grow upward
As we serve Him with faith, each doing the best as His steward.

God wants us to serve Him wholeheartedly against deceitful foolishness
By His Scriptural counsel for our sanctification and cleanliness… 
Great is He in forgiving our confessed sinfulness
As we depend on Him with faith to protect our testimony’s righteousness.

October 5, 2025
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Lord God, You Are My Journey Usher

January 30 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Exodus 38-40

Key Verse – Exodus 40:38 For the cloud of the LORD was upon the tabernacle by day, and fire was on it by night, in the sight of all the house of Israel, throughout all their journeys.

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY JOURNEY USHER
				
Lord God, You are my journey Usher 
toward Your fellowship’s divine height 
Thank You for overlaying me with Your love’s delight
And cleansing me to be a vessel that’s right
As You bear me with Your mercies’ might.

Lord God, You are my journey Usher 
toward Your tabernacle’s spirited worship 
Thank You for overwhelming me with Your gracious leadership
And commanding me to be at Your service by Your partnership
As You build me up in Your ministry around Your fellowship.

Lord God, You are my journey Usher 
toward Your commandments’ holy fulfillment 
Thank You for overtaking me with Your work of kingly achievement
And covering me with Your righteousness against worldly defilement
As You beautify me with sanctification-garment.

Lord God, You are my journey Usher 
toward Your Gospel sharing’s compassion 
Thank You for overpowering me by Your testimony’s glorification
And correcting me through the purity of Your admonition
As You bid me to remain in Your blessed congregation.

Lord God, You are my journey Usher 
toward Your entrusted grand office 
Thank You for overseeing me with Your light in Your presence-edifice
And catering to me by Your provisions surpassing charity philosophies
As You bend me of my pride before Your offerings’ trophies. 

Lord God, You are my journey Usher 
toward Your will’s hallowed anointing 
Thank You for overshadowing me in Your pardon’s perfecting
And clothing me with Your protection against sin-hurting
As You bring me to Your rearing nourishment to overcome testing.

Lord God, You are my journey Usher 
toward Your kingdom’s magnificent glory 
Thank You for overturning me so I am able to avoid corrupt periphery
And choosing me among Your called servants to enjoy Your victory
As You bind me to Your welfare-care against harm’s fury.

January 30, 2023
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member HEART THAT IS BETROTHED UNTO THE LORD IN FAITHFULNESS

September 19 Heart for God Bible Meditations Based on Hosea 1-7

Key Verse – Hosea 2:20 I will even betroth thee unto me in faithfulness: and thou shalt know the LORD.

HEART THAT IS BETROTHED UNTO THE LORD IN FAITHFULNESS

Our heart is betrothed unto the Lord in faithfulness with His assurance
He unconditionally loves us along merciful perseverance
Around His salvation, marked by eternal endurance
Of everlasting redemption’s insurance.

Our heart is betrothed unto the Lord in faithfulness with His graciousness
He unfailingly teaches us wise truthfulness
Around His Scripture-completeness
Of illumining discipleship’s fruitfulness.

Our heart is betrothed unto the Lord in faithfulness with His authority
He unceasingly transforms us for useful capacity
Around His might-sovereignty
Of effective ministry’s stability.

Our heart is betrothed unto the Lord in faithfulness with His light
He undoubtedly forgives us with purging love from guilt blight
Around His joyfulness-delight
Of peaceful contentment’s flight.

Our heart is betrothed unto the Lord in faithfulness with His fervency
He undeniably inspires us with faithful constancy
Around His righteousness-fervency
Of productive stewardship’s persistency.

Our heart is betrothed unto the Lord in faithfulness with His encouragement
He untiringly cheers us with revival engagement
Around His presence- fulfillment 
Of active fellowship’s commitment.

Our heart is betrothed unto the Lord in faithfulness with His direction
He unfalteringly exhorts us with guiding admonition
Around His Word-instruction 
Of blessed prayerfulness’ function.

September 19, 2026

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