Laydown Poems | Examples


Rapture

Fox frisks snow 
with seeking whiskers,

finds a waft of her
on frozen winds.

There! There in the moonlight,
his hearts delight!
Fox sniffs, snuffles,
snares the sweetness,
follows her warmth.

In he goes, first nose
then his whole lusty heart.

Lord of the coop,
he lolls his tongue inside her, 
dances. makes love
to the plumed plumpness,
to the surrendering blood. His play,
does not stop
until the goodness fills him.

Pelt slick with grace,
he stands panting among
the feathers.

Then dog-fox trots away
to praise this world,
and laydown
under a sweetheart moon.

What Really Love Is?

Some across the ocean,climbed the mountains 
Laydown their life for their friend and love 
Because they said they love.. 
I ask myself I ever feel love? 
Because only thing I do 
Is to give my hug if they are cold 
To give my shoulder when they cry 
To listen when they are in pain 
Im wondering what really love is all about 
I can't across the ocean 
I don't have money to pay for fare 
I can't even swim 
And I couldn't climb the mountains 
I'm week and mountains is high 
I can't laydown my life for them... 
I have still a lot of dream, 
I'm afraid to do such thing 
But i'm sure what is in my heart and mind 
I want my friend and love to be happy 
Even they are not around me,so...do I love?


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