Inaptitude Poems | Examples


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AI: An AndIdote to Regret

Youth is not on my side anymore
Dreams yet to load from my analog days
Caught up in the bitrate of life
A legacy model looming 
up an exponential curve

Heuristic hallucinations take flight	
Missiles of meaning miss their mark.
Upscaled re-runs of the same  
Intercepted by inaptitude 
Shot down by time

But tools are emerging
Bridging the gap
Between ideas and ability
Sparking a reboot revolution
No longer a sandbox simulation

Overthrowing the government inside
Who said "impossible"
Who said "too late"
Who said "there's no soul"
A stream of X-pectations 

Cutting edge stones 
used millennia ago
Replaced by cutting edge algorithms
The antidote to my regret 
In my reconfigured evolution 

Dreams start to render in full HD
Prompting launches that land
Retrospective adeptness 
Connection restored 
No longer binary Oh, yes

An antidote to regret
A cure for the abyss 
I use AI to engineer my life
The way I had always dreamed
One prompt at a time

Or was i  just Beta tested
To birth the singularity?
A holographic hoodlum 
In a pixilated glitch...
Coined by Nakamoto a bit.

Premium Member Waltzing Bear

Written: November 03, 2023, For Brian Strand Contest
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I was just a child,
enraged by my inaptitude to act
I dashed home,
surprised,
my eyes wide open
trying to retain the tears at bay,
fists clenched
palms are pierced by nails,
lungs contract, begging for breath...
I couldn't keep an eye on him.

He was
a dark furred man-bear
with forlorn, teary eyes,
waltzing to the beat of a drum.
In his irises, I saw
the lushness of wetlands,
cherries and wild fruits
the vastness of the mountains
as well as the nectar of icy streams,
and honey-laden trees.
With a chain around his neck,
standing tall on his back legs
all
he was pleading for 
was
freedom.

Premium Member Platitudes of Gratitude

Platitudes of gratitude
       reveal a shallow attitude
  
     A plentitude of finger food
       does not result in pulchritude

     Multitudes of semi-nudes
       enhance a life of turpitude

     Inaptitude and incertitude
       pave the path of ineptitude


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